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12-07-03, 02:31 PM
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This shit was tight. Good flow and not bad vocab. Liked they story line alot. Keep droppin
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12-07-03, 06:12 PM
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Yo ... this peice was strait maddness fa sho kid... everythang was there... ya flow fell off once or twice... but disregard this down puts this was a good ass piece... everythang was there
i was feeling the topic an the way it keep you on focus of the whole peace... you killed it... good mic... And never quit elevating...on3 |
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12-07-03, 06:55 PM
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it was really good. some parts didnt ryme but I think youve got a future in free style
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12-08-03, 04:28 AM
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^ some parts didn't rhyme? :S
anyways, thanks for all the support dudes..... it made my day opening this and finding out that all of you enjoyed reading my piece... so thanks again, and i seriously appreciate it |
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12-08-03, 09:08 AM
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vocab needs work but it was tight
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12-09-03, 03:27 AM
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up
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12-09-03, 04:05 AM
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up
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12-10-03, 02:48 AM
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up.... dont sleep
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12-10-03, 06:41 AM
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nice shit dawg
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12-10-03, 07:38 AM
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DAmn son. I can really relate to that shit. not a thing is wrong wit it. Its perfect. kepp it up man you'll be big. MAke it to the top and take over the game. Your shits inspiring man. I really hope to see you live someday.
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12-11-03, 01:29 AM
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^ lol!
thanks for the positive feed back... |
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12-12-03, 04:45 AM
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up
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12-12-03, 05:25 AM
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up
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12-12-03, 06:39 PM
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up
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12-12-03, 06:43 PM
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Very nice drop...interesting piece. Very Consistant flow and good use of multis...ok vocab but could have been better.
i say 8/10 nice drop...keep em commin
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