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Old 12-18-03, 03:34 PM   #1
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hey...hey demik...reply to three open mics and post links or this is gone

lol, I'll reply to this when you post your links, hoecake
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Old 12-18-03, 03:36 PM   #2
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Shoosh...I'm the God mod here...don't talk to me like I'm a subordinate
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Old 12-18-03, 03:42 PM   #3
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and the good word is...wow

too long for my taste, but it shows me how bad i am

great job here sir (yes its a guy) and may i ask a favor
there an open mic piece i did
ss:special miseducation

feedback would be appreciated...
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Old 12-19-03, 12:47 PM   #4
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Funk you for the look
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Old 12-19-03, 12:50 PM   #5
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N demik doesnt return feedback favors

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Old 12-19-03, 12:58 PM   #6
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I used to....

But it was a bad experience...

I'll see about giving you a response later.
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Old 12-19-03, 01:15 PM   #7
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Demik ain't reply to mine either, hence i didn't reply to this ..
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Old 12-19-03, 01:42 PM   #8
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^LOL...

You never asked me to reply to yours though
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Old 01-01-04, 11:02 AM   #9
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Tee hee... Dizowning
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Old 01-01-04, 11:44 AM   #10
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this was one of the best pieces i've read in an open mic in a long time, it had a lot of description and very thought out lines a lot of good vocab excellent song, the flow was great but hard cause i couldnt pernounce some of the words correctly i dont think but all in all that was amazing keep it up man

and if you could could you peepm the song in my sig and leave honest feedback thanks man
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Old 01-01-04, 09:18 PM   #11
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this is was dope

i wasnt actually going to read the whole thing but when i started i finished and i like it...u put the picture in my head good (even thought it was hard to understand)..ur wordplay and creativy and not to mention ur vocab is deffinately the dopest on the site..and u have yet to bring me a shit one...

i give this a 1 and a half out of 10 :P

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Old 01-01-04, 09:22 PM   #12
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this was dope.

Flow was dope.
Structure was dope.
Vocab was dope.
Concept was dope.

I'd say dope piece. 9/10
long but yet affective
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Old 01-02-04, 04:40 AM   #13
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Shit Demik......i see your still at it man....

PuRe forever bro

i like your new style, you toned down the vocab to a point where i can actually read it without a thesaurus and dictionary.....

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Old 01-02-04, 11:31 AM   #14
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Yes, very well-written, contrary to the beliefs of Lord Baron & Co. Of course, as it has become the trademark of a Demik written, vocabulary & satire seemed to dominate the majority of this piece. There were plenty of quotables, but a few were especially intriguing:
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That's just an awful case scenario, the apex of train wrecks
I hate this! Being that Earth is just an alias for fray rests

After your explanation, I think that this was a particularly relevant & innovative line.
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We've driven the Styx in, we all listen, just don't pay interest
word was never born, Mother Nature was on the pill during sex

Again, a satirical metaphor utilized to perfection. .
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In a bid for reprisal, confidence uprising is held at eBay
we stay contorted, extorted in sum, for some there's hell to pay

(copy & paste previous praise)
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Stuck in the same....phase, with different behavior patterns
I'm timed out for a New York minute, but why stay in Manhatten?

This was my favorite line of all, & I am still wondering how the hell a damned British national could convey such a concept. Have you been to New York? Because that would be a commonplace sentiment in the likes of you & yours, I'm sure. .
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And they failed to merit from life, confused like foreign homage
as to why people assume living is beautiful was common knowledge.

Of course, the conclusion is full of luster, as always.

Cheers, good read, deserving of Hall of Fame honors, I am sure. I like the new Soundclick track, too - it's a Badmajik production, is it not? Post more @ Rb, please.
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Old 01-02-04, 12:18 PM   #15
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yo i swear dis shit was good u know...but i checked out ur tracks on soundclick and man u got some gay voice u know....tryin to sound like canibus or some shit
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