AHAHAHAHA, MY CRACKA... (LMAO YOU SAID THAT TO ME)
na, for real dawg... this was off the hook man...
I like that mexi rap... that shit is ill and when I seen that chorus,
I was like... oh damn, I gotta read this... lmao... very very nice
shit in here...
my favorite line was "And rip your every FIBER… like I was BREAD for this."

lmao^^^ that was an ill ass line...
and your structure is gettin better dawg... and your flows comin
up with it... mad props to ya dawgy...
~AshY~

thanks for all the love from all of you im glad to see im improving that is an essential for me