hey nice piece yall i nominate this for legends. nice topic and beautifully put together, it deserves it. . . . . . . . .

really good concept, and done very, very nicely.
some really good wordplay, and vocabulary.

g-hod, some ill as fuck vocab, and the pictures you painted with words was great.

TR, nice shit, didnt stray, nice vocab, some cool immagery.

peace

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legends? yay

thanks alot guys, up up and away

See, its not that hard.

Fucking rebelion starter G.Hod.

Freeposter!!!

up up

definitly Legends potential

flow was remarkably sweet
both dope writers and managed to surprise me

nice imagery and concept as well

two different styles that worked well together

nice

well it got in legends

feedback?

what can i say that hasn't already been said? basically, i loved it, everything about it was dope and you are both great lyricists, judging by this alone (i will look out for more of your work!) vocab was the thing that stood out the most to me, besides the underlying message.

agree with him about favorite line^

anyway..
ghod ur flow was nice..
and a good bar structure
it got better as i read..and i wasnt dissapointed by it
i've seen u do better though


realist..
flow was decent
nice bar structure too

Could I practice law, when I play with violence
Decided my fate with quick silence, past tense
Darkness surrounds me, night school commence
good shit^

your verse just lacked the depth of ghods
good collab though