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Old 12-25-03, 02:41 PM   #16
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Emerge..dope piece you got going on.
What one lacked, the other made up for.
All 3 styles complemented each other very nicely.
Speek and White, ya both did very well. Good going.
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Old 12-25-03, 02:53 PM   #17
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damn , nice spit playas, this a a very good collab, ima qoute the whole thing cuz it was all tite, the flow was nice, the creativity was nice,m good vocab, everythin was good, keep it up
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Old 12-25-03, 10:15 PM   #18
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I liked this topic,
all 3 of you had verry good verses,
on point, precise,
The flow, its stayed with each verse,
great vocabulary usage, multis
sometimes the vocab made it a little hard to understand,
If you look down the side of emerges verse,
the first letter of every line says,
MY INFLUENCE OVER YOU,
i found that very witty,
nice drops for all of you,
props
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Old 12-26-03, 12:27 AM   #19
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Old 12-26-03, 02:05 PM   #20
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Old 12-26-03, 02:28 PM   #21
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as it's already been said, the 3 different styles together is what really made this piece stand out, each verse complimented the other extremely well...emerge i liked your rhyme scheme as well with the "my influence over you" that was creative...overall this is one of the better open mics i have read in a while, on this site or any...
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Old 12-27-03, 07:17 AM   #22
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Agreed this was dope.. i liked every aspect.. nice peice yo.. keep up the good work and dont give up

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Old 12-27-03, 07:17 AM   #23
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ahhh i always forget to post a rating

well here it is: 8.5 out of 10

Good Luck!!
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Old 12-27-03, 04:31 PM   #24
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thanks homo
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Old 12-28-03, 12:53 AM   #25
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thanks

lmao at kid saying vocab lacked...moron

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First off: September 4 1985 vs. February 6 1978. Kid?

Second off: Yeah, you're probably right. There's no possibility that anything in your verse could be lacking. That's why you are relegated to posting your shit on a message board instead of getting played on MTV and selling millions. Because you are perfect. Were you born a pompous ass or is that a trait you've aquired being king of A FUCKING MESSAGE BOARD?
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Old 12-28-03, 04:49 AM   #26
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you are talking shit you are 23 on a message board and no i didnt say my drop didnt lack anything but vocab was certainly not it...go away thank you
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Old 12-28-03, 05:32 AM   #27
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lol, everything has already been said =) I always luv dese kinda of pieces lol. What I didnt hear others compliment on is that you all stayed on topic =) that is always a good thing to see in this type of track. I kno many people who will be talking about lifes struggle and the next...they're talkin bout get laid in the corner bathroom of the McDonalds in the mall and...God, even im going off topic now =). Anyways...good drop by all three of 3, good to come to this site and see der are sum ill heads here instead of thoe dick riding faggots in Front Lines. Emerge my man...lol, dat shit was beyond ill, The first letter of every line lol...Your a Genius Man.

If you guys wouldn't mind...coudl u plz drop a vote on the battles in my sig plz...The dickriding force of the FrontLines army has decided to attack me. =)

Very good piece...now get workin on the dam audio. Lates.
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Old 12-28-03, 05:57 PM   #28
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you are talking shit you are 23 on a message board and no i didnt say my drop didnt lack anything but vocab was certainly not it...go away thank you


23. Your math is a little off there buddy. Go check those dates again. And just because I mentioned vocab doesn't mean it was directed squarely at you. Two other heads spit on that composition. Get over yourself.
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Old 12-28-03, 06:45 PM   #29
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Anyways...good drop by all three of 3, good to come to this site and see der are sum ill heads here instead of thoe dick riding faggots in Front Lines. Emerge my man...lol, dat shit was beyond ill, The first letter of every line lol...Your a Genius Man.
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Old 12-28-03, 07:06 PM   #30
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"Nice job. I liked this collab, many times the different styles of writters cause the collab to seem a bit messy, all over the place. Not in this case each one of you complamented eachothers verse"

bouncedoggydog...


I agree with him...Overall was very different from most collabs...
Good vocab well used for what you three were trying to script upon...

Emerge good job first time seeing you drop...

Whitelightning...Nice style..good opener and finisher..

Speek EZ...Unique opener...

as for complexity..just add a little bit more of a twist...

Over all was a very good collab...


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