lmao at the end i can hear your mouse clicking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

man, i normally like your stuff alot, but this, sounds like your tryna sound like eminem.

plus, the beat is dope? am i listening to the same beat as you peeps, 'cause that beat is absolutely shit.

peace

lol...this shit was raw...........lots of tight punches.......aint gonna talk bout timing fallin off a couple times, because it's a freestyle. shit was funny, punches hit hard and production was good.........highly enjoyable listen

THanks everyone..... i dunno why you say im trying to sound like em.... we sound nothing alike.. one he uses LOTS of multis in his freestyles i use like one.. do you mean by using punchlines??

this beat is raw.... underground type shit.. its understandable for a few people not to like it.. its different.

you know you cant be different and be accepted.........who wants originality??.......no one I know.........now get your ass back in the shadows of everybody else..........DONT EVER TRY SOMETHING DIFFERENT, and think people will like it...use your brain.......next time try stealing a nas or wu tang beat and rap like your from the east coast dammit

your voice, normally when i listen to you, you don't slip into eminem's accent......if i need to explain further, then i will assume your just dumb.
peace

we will beat you on the same beat nigga...fall back

lol^

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Sonz Of Enlightenment

...i heard this a few days ago...maybe two...yeh it was coo...smooth...that beat...that beat is dope...like made for battling...or frees...im feelin it at least...u sound crazy...different sorta than the other song i peeped...sorta....you sorta a lul lul bit got a eminem feel...yeh...nice shit though...funny shit with nice punches...and yeh i never noticed my mouse clickin before till now...anyways...yeh big slap in their face...word...i might peep the battle...

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univerSaL hiatus

hey you!
your worthless like pre-owned autos...
hahaha

PNEUMATIC...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/saltheking.htm

nice beat, tight flow... that shit is funny.... hangin on the net, and charmin lines killed it... good drop

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HK The Great

Ok... I listened... if you think this is written you are fucking stupid...



Honestly...



They aren't even really good punches... their ok... 90% of them are played... besides the whole thing is mostly filler... not much wordplay...


for a free... it's ok...




As far as being a written... if I'm wrong and it is... this was pretty garbage... for a freestyle it's ok...



If you think it's a written... then you must be a textgenius... period...




Island...

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<center>Merk Squad
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Verbal Kent
Genesis</center>

im just gonna ignore everything you just said.. sounds like ya just talkin out ya ass fam.. i wanna hear ya audio.. you talk like you hot fam.

lmao... you're right... I do talk out my ass... *shakes head* but my ass is more truth than 99% of everyone in this thread...

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<center>Merk Squad
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Verbal Kent
Genesis</center>

see now u kno ur not nice man .. listen to people other then DR's just elavate