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06-03-04, 03:58 PM | #16 | |||||
retired.
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IP: 919D 9DA1
Yep, same deal as that guy said. Dirtboy, we need more quality control on this league, so people don't get free wins and have to waste time on some herb who does this:
Yo I use these lyrics as a knife cutting out ur vocals and watchin ur BLACK ass scream// The blood drippin to the floor making me wonder if anyone could here the SMACK// ( of the blood on the floor) I mean please... blood doesn't "SMACK" and you can't fucking rhyme one word with a word randomly in the middle of the previous line. For fucks sake. v/ black, even though his verse was almost as much ass.
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06-03-04, 04:06 PM | #17 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
alright the breakdowns...first up is
kkk Yo I use these lyrics as a knife cutting out ur vocals and watchin ur BLACK ass scream// The blood drippin to the floor making me wonder if anyone could here the SMACK// ( of the blood on the floor)3 ur mother's maden name is trish the white traller TRASH// who's dirty ass gave me my painfull RASH//3.5 so do not act like u are a THUG// for all ur white ass needs is a prisoners HUG//2 So go on bitch let us no how it feels to be called a WHIGGA// u are a pain in the ass with all these wanna be mc's and u are iratating me like a CHIGGA// -3 So I am threw with this shit before this vote can count to 2// u are gonna no who is dishin U//2 and now for black siinz fuck it a quick 6 liner..........will merk this fool You'll Fear This Vet! Peers Face Death! This Emcee-Aint-Fresh... ...You Aint Seein-My-Text Matta Face 'See-A-Mess...5 And I Knew You Was "Crap" But Didn't Know You Wuz "B.S"... This guy the think hes the best but got sunned by The One... Take this dude ravage his soul and make this pussy run...4 Hes the hater of Klu Kluks Klan but if you look at his pic... You see one by one him sucking each of their little dicks...4 gud enuf to beat this guys verse......pc wow that was terrible also...you guys should be ashamed. v- black siinz
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06-03-04, 05:37 PM | #18 | |||||||
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IP: 456D 2E0B
uppin......and yeah all you peeps think im really that weak....it took me 2 minutes to key that up......after i saw his verse i was only gunna come with four lines but decided to come with 3 bars
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06-03-04, 05:48 PM | #19 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: FD6B F0D6
kkk haters verse
Yo I use these lyrics as a knife cutting out ur vocals and watchin ur BLACK ass scream// The blood drippin to the floor making me wonder if anyone could here the SMACK// ( of the blood on the floor) horrible opener first of all black shouldn't be the rhyme because it doesnt flow well with the next line and smack.. dont ever rhyme a word thats not at the end of a line unless its a double rhyme your rhymes should be at the end of your sentence, this was one terrrible opener lacked creativity also ur mother's maden name is trish the white traller TRASH// who's dirty ass gave me my painfull RASH// ok this shit is elementary but nevertheless its funny however not that dope so do not act like u are a THUG// for all ur white ass needs is a prisoners HUG// yawnn..zzzzzzz.lol ohh my bad shit was terrible yo boring crap So go on bitch let us no how it feels to be called a WHIGGA// u are a pain in the ass with all these wanna be mc's and u are iratating me like a CHIGGA// this line was especially bad because black siinz is not even white So I am threw with this shit before this vote can count to 2// u are gonna no who is dishin U// overall: terrible verse disses and rhymes were elementary as fuck shit was boring as hell also. black siinz verse You'll Fear This Vet! Peers Face Death! This Emcee-Aint-Fresh... ...You Aint Seein-My-Text Matta Face 'See-A-Mess... And I Knew You Was "Crap" But Didn't Know You Wuz "B.S"... ok lines i felt like you could have come harder here i know your opponent sucks but you still should come your hardest ive seen you come with shit 10 times better than this This guy the think hes the best but got sunned by The One... Take this dude ravage his soul and make this pussy run... Hes the hater of Klu Kluks Klan but if you look at his pic... You see one by one him sucking each of their little dicks... lol nice closer overall i know this wasnt one of your best efforts but nevertheless it was enough to get the win vote- black for overall harder hitting punchlines and less herbish material than his opponent
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06-03-04, 06:45 PM | #20 | |||||||
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IP: D1E6 F404
upping for more votes
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06-03-04, 06:54 PM | #21 | |||
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IP: A5DB 2AB7
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Yo I use these lyrics as a knife cutting out ur vocals and watchin ur BLACK ass scream// The blood drippin to the floor making me wonder if anyone could here the SMACK// ( of the blood on the floor) it only gets worse from there blak actually came with decent punches and personals so he gets my vote v/ black,
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06-03-04, 07:14 PM | #22 | |||||
Still Sick
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IP: 9A73 DF08
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stfu nolost4rhymes anyway black siinz, you wondered why I said you werent good for old rb? anyway v/black because KKKhater is weak as FAWK! and he lost
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06-03-04, 07:54 PM | #23 | |||||||
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IP: A9A5 2BC6
haha kyro you fucking crack me up....you keep ducking me on both of these sites and you wunder why everyone thinks you run your mouth to much....and dont make me laugh......runnin wit a crew like Catch Twenty Two......thats fucking weak man.......you should fucking battle me for a pinkslip battle so i can shut you the fuck up for wunc.......peace
uppin....6-0 should be closed....shoulda been closed 3 votes again
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06-03-04, 09:27 PM | #24 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
6-0 that's all blak siinz wins
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