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Old 06-03-04, 03:58 PM   #16
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Yep, same deal as that guy said. Dirtboy, we need more quality control on this league, so people don't get free wins and have to waste time on some herb who does this:

Yo I use these lyrics as a knife cutting out ur vocals and watchin ur BLACK ass scream//
The blood drippin to the floor making me wonder if anyone could here the SMACK// ( of the blood on the floor)

I mean please... blood doesn't "SMACK" and you can't fucking rhyme one word with a word randomly in the middle of the previous line. For fucks sake.

v/ black, even though his verse was almost as much ass.
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Old 06-03-04, 04:06 PM   #17
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alright the breakdowns...first up is

kkk
Yo I use these lyrics as a knife cutting out ur vocals and watchin ur BLACK ass scream//
The blood drippin to the floor making me wonder if anyone could here the SMACK// ( of the blood on the floor)3
ur mother's maden name is trish the white traller TRASH//
who's dirty ass gave me my painfull RASH//3.5
so do not act like u are a THUG//
for all ur white ass needs is a prisoners HUG//2
So go on bitch let us no how it feels to be called a WHIGGA//
u are a pain in the ass with all these wanna be mc's and u are iratating me like a CHIGGA// -3
So I am threw with this shit before this vote can count to 2//
u are gonna no who is dishin U//2


and now for black siinz

fuck it a quick 6 liner..........will merk this fool

You'll Fear This Vet! Peers Face Death! This Emcee-Aint-Fresh...
...You Aint Seein-My-Text Matta Face 'See-A-Mess...5
And I Knew You Was "Crap" But Didn't Know You Wuz "B.S"...
This guy the think hes the best but got sunned by The One...
Take this dude ravage his soul and make this pussy run...4
Hes the hater of Klu Kluks Klan but if you look at his pic...
You see one by one him sucking each of their little dicks...4

gud enuf to beat this guys verse......pc

wow that was terrible also...you guys should be ashamed.

v- black siinz
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Old 06-03-04, 05:37 PM   #18
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uppin......and yeah all you peeps think im really that weak....it took me 2 minutes to key that up......after i saw his verse i was only gunna come with four lines but decided to come with 3 bars
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Old 06-03-04, 05:48 PM   #19
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kkk haters verse

Yo I use these lyrics as a knife cutting out ur vocals and watchin ur BLACK ass scream//
The blood drippin to the floor making me wonder if anyone could here the SMACK// ( of the blood on the floor)
horrible opener first of all black shouldn't be the rhyme because it doesnt flow well with the next line and smack.. dont ever rhyme a word thats not at the end of a line unless its a double rhyme your rhymes should be at the end of your sentence, this was one terrrible opener lacked creativity also

ur mother's maden name is trish the white traller TRASH//
who's dirty ass gave me my painfull RASH//
ok this shit is elementary but nevertheless its funny however not that dope

so do not act like u are a THUG//
for all ur white ass needs is a prisoners HUG//
yawnn..zzzzzzz.lol ohh my bad shit was terrible yo boring crap

So go on bitch let us no how it feels to be called a WHIGGA//
u are a pain in the ass with all these wanna be mc's and u are iratating me like a CHIGGA//
this line was especially bad because black siinz is not even white

So I am threw with this shit before this vote can count to 2//
u are gonna no who is dishin U//
overall: terrible verse disses and rhymes were elementary as fuck shit was boring as hell also.

black siinz verse
You'll Fear This Vet! Peers Face Death! This Emcee-Aint-Fresh...
...You Aint Seein-My-Text Matta Face 'See-A-Mess...
And I Knew You Was "Crap" But Didn't Know You Wuz "B.S"...
ok lines i felt like you could have come harder here i know your opponent sucks but you still should come your hardest ive seen you come with shit 10 times better than this

This guy the think hes the best but got sunned by The One...
Take this dude ravage his soul and make this pussy run...
Hes the hater of Klu Kluks Klan but if you look at his pic...
You see one by one him sucking each of their little dicks...
lol nice closer overall i know this wasnt one of your best efforts but nevertheless it was enough to get the win

vote- black for overall harder hitting punchlines and less herbish material than his opponent
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Old 06-03-04, 06:45 PM   #20
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upping for more votes
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Old 06-03-04, 06:54 PM   #21
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Yo I use these lyrics as a knife cutting out ur vocals and watchin ur BLACK ass scream//
The blood drippin to the floor making me wonder if anyone could here the SMACK// ( of the blood on the floor)

it only gets worse from there

blak actually came with decent punches and personals so he gets my vote

v/ black,
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Old 06-03-04, 07:14 PM   #22
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Quote:
Originally Posted by UnDeStRuCaBlE
hahaha..true true....n he's bout to win against me cuz he got hate votes against me, n dick riders

stfu nolost4rhymes

anyway
black siinz, you wondered why I said you werent good for old rb?
anyway
v/black
because KKKhater is weak as FAWK!
and he lost
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Old 06-03-04, 07:54 PM   #23
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haha kyro you fucking crack me up....you keep ducking me on both of these sites and you wunder why everyone thinks you run your mouth to much....and dont make me laugh......runnin wit a crew like Catch Twenty Two......thats fucking weak man.......you should fucking battle me for a pinkslip battle so i can shut you the fuck up for wunc.......peace

uppin....6-0 should be closed....shoulda been closed 3 votes again
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Old 06-03-04, 09:27 PM   #24
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6-0 that's all blak siinz wins
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