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Valor 4 44.44%
Lethal Lunatic 5 55.56%
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Old 07-19-04, 11:16 AM   #16
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Vote: VALOR

Both sucked, but he came a little more witty and personal to take this.

Lethal Lunatic needs harder personals than VALOR-able.
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Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
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Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
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Old 07-19-04, 12:37 PM   #17
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Quote:
Originally Posted by VALOR
this dude looses battles then cry's and throws fits..
i didn't even know they let herbs in hardwood class-sickz..
Basic but I guess this was a personal...weak one tho.

lmao at this dude thinking hes ~A LETHAL VETRAN~..(user title)
ill leave this guy's brain fryed needin ill-legal EX-CEDRIN..(pain killer)
thats not a punch.....talkin about beaten up people aint a punch it aint really dissin him

yo in this shit your wackness aint packin any heat..
you should ask anyone dude there aint no beatin me..
like Shab said...self glorification.

its been a while homie wtf when the hell are u gonna be spittin..
and it's sad ur gonna loose and your verse is probably pre-writtin..
basic........

this was weak.
8 quik lines, u better show


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Originally Posted by Lethal Lunatic
The only person that is gonna ~rest ya case~ is me *
As the Judge, I’m a prove you wack so now your guilty
ok...an attempt at complexity & personals 2 do with his crew...noy very hard but nice try.

Uh huh okay now shut up before I cast ya dreams away **
Ok so your the jury and you can’t still put me away today ***
yeh again...attempting wordplay & personals.....decent.

Wit rhymes or courage I’m still hittin you and ya crew ****
The ways you eva knew, ended up to come to hit you
WHAT?
Look at this cat thinkin he’s valor-able but he’s worthless *****
You can’t mess wit a cat that since birth-was-bless
GAYYYYYYYYYYYY

Only thing you are to me is just another wack contestant
A shot to the stomach make your burn out into your intestant
WASTE OF 2 LINES

It’s only the eleventh line and still I don't even need it
Ya try so hard to spit a verse that you actually bleed it
ermmm NO.
* Rest ya case= The Jury(his crew) Motto
** Cast ya dreams= dream cast(his crew
*** The jury can’t lock me up
**** Rhymes of courage- his user title
***** Valor-able= his name-able


DON’T EXPLAIN UR PUNCHES OR BOLD THEM THAT WILL MAKE U LOOK A HERB. I will give this 2 Lethal because even tho I liked 2 bars from both of u his were more complex & were not basic.

Vote Lethal. This was a very disapointing battle.
 
Old 07-19-04, 01:04 PM   #18
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yo this goes to lethal easily. Valors lines was weak, no real personals, and his closer looked like it couldve fir min the midd le of the verse

now lethal, your verse wasnt great either. but u had more punches, ad thats basically all i could say about your verse a exept you played on his crews name too long

vote/lethal
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Old 07-19-04, 07:15 PM   #19
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Damn i wrote a whole bunch of shit and it didnt take oh well. This battle goes to Valor for better punches, both of you guys came pretty weak. Lethal you would have took this if you would have re-worded some of your punches. Then your punches would have hit harder. For example. "you claim your the judge and jury but you cant even put this battle away, its good to have hopes and aspirations, but im about to cast your dreams away". you see how that makes that punch much harder. you had the personals to work with, but needed to re-word them a little.

vote- valor.
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Old 07-19-04, 09:42 PM   #20
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yea i wasnt feelin this battle...

Punches- LL
Personals- LL...i felt both were weak but def LL
Flow-Tie
Opener-LL
Closer-LL
Overall-LL

both weak versus (Excedrin is a weight loss suppliment...not a pain killer....and its intestines not intestents)....but yea LL came harder wit punches and personals...and there wasnt a lot of complexity or wordplay so vote LL
 
Old 07-19-04, 10:00 PM   #21
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VALOR:
this dude looses battles then cry's and throws fits..
i didn't even know they let herbs in hardwood class-sickz..
^a personal...but hella weak...

lmao at this dude thinking hes ~A LETHAL VETRAN~..(user title)
ill leave this guy's brain fryed needin ill-legal EX-CEDRIN..(pain killer)
^weak...

yo in this shit your wackness aint packin any heat..
you should ask anyone dude there aint no beatin me..
^filler...

its been a while homie wtf when the hell are u gonna be spittin..
and it's sad ur gonna loose and your verse is probably pre-writtin..
^weak...but meh...atleast it's better than the other attempts


Lethal Lunatic:
The only person that is gonna ~rest ya case~ is me *
As the Judge, I’m a prove you wack so now your guilty
^2nd line was crap...1st line was pretty good...

Uh huh okay now shut up before I cast ya dreams away **
Ok so your the jury and you can’t still put me away today ***
^weak...but atleast der personals

Wit rhymes or courage I’m still hittin you and ya crew ****
The ways you eva knew, ended up to come to hit you
^weak...but a personal atleast

Look at this cat thinkin he’s valor-able but he’s worthless *****
You can’t mess wit a cat that since birth-was-bless
^1st line was a coo personal...2nd was shit

Only thing you are to me is just another wack contestant
A shot to the stomach make your burn out into your intestant
^weak...

It’s only the eleventh line and still I don't even need it
Ya try so hard to spit a verse that you actually bleed it
^you got lazy and just typed anythin to end it off...

Overall: Lethal Lunatic
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