good battle both of u..jus checkin the polls

Voted For: Reckless

ya confused? this is text thought you quit ya got alias’s (a-L.I-ass)U’ll jus get them 2 settle the score,
you really “wreck-less” n “wack-more” ya punches won’t sting even if you fucked a beehive whore,
not personal

quick call spuls mom cause hes in ”class-sic” hard fakin n aint fly rock’n a feather sweater
it’s the “class-sic” excuse, reck’s only ever “feeling ill” when he’s “under the weather”,
decent but "" is gay

like female sparks this battles a ‘miss match’ you’re the bitch n im causing the fire,
set flames ta this ”clas-sic” queer, this gardener should’ve remained a herb suplyer,
decent

My hits swell ya punches don’t hit well,’ya don’t hit hard’ spul jus’buntswhen he bats’
ya like a ”fly-lumber-jack” da way ya keep frontin wack with“plane-herbish-ax”(acts)
not personal

In dis battle im “cancerous” got spul gasp’ in for breath like I jus cut n removed his lung
spul a vet?Hell no”bounce” outta site like‘tigga” get launderd tumbled pressed n hung
nice metas

I snap limbs n break ‘trees’, make gee’s “leave” swing with ease ta were reckless pee’s,
Honestly! Bring’n ya dads pecker hair ta emerge is da only way ya get’n ta pub-E.R-t
decent

Dropping bombs.? nope ya all wrong kid, ya jus another wack emcee wannabe clone
Its “reckless” get’n pissed on n neva see’n pussy like “toilet seats” in gay foster homes
not personal decent though

dis battles like “trashin new watches” cause its a waste of good time,no need-ta-taunt
like elite ghost offspring, I “pro-ceed-ta-haunt” congrats homo ya jus got killed with font,
nice multies

Pray to god at night, and he'll tell you that stretched lines won't get you far
I mean, yo fuckin' lines are more stretched than yo momma's bra
lol not personal though

I fuck yo girl, but when you walk in, I don't even try to hide her
Cuz suckin' dudes dick.... is the only time you a Low Rider
decent

I mean, you're such a fag, prolly like it up the butt
Cuz jus like Lance Armstrong... you cannot fuck
.............

You couldn't be hot, if you spat next to the sun
Man, you suck... and yes, that is a pun
lol nice

Fuckin' wit me, herb, that ain't the way to go
Like a guy after sex, bitch, you cannot flow
decent
If you try frontin', I'll beat you agin and agin
Jus like Gunit101... you'll never get the win
not personal

You'll never make it far, you'll always live in tents
Yo verses, jus like yo name, don't make any sense
lol

You like dick up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy
then you shove one in yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy
decent

vote reck for a slightly better verse

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Voted For: DV8

ok reckless good flow you got that punches and disses loomed on homophobic too much gay disses that got played hard and vocab was lacking ok verse not anywheres near as good as i expected from you 4/10
dv8 fix your fucking stucture its annoying as fuck too streched kills the flow here but good punches great vocab alot of personals and nice disses you came hard here a solid verse7/10
reckless no hate you basically lost cuz you had no personals and way more puns then punches that fucked it up and dv8 came hard here while you seem to be slacking no hate just honest vote dv8 gets my vote

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yeah good flow...i liked both of oyu guys but reckless still murdered him....the other had bad structure but he had heat just not enuf......
uppin battle

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

its crazy how spul is gettin all the VET votes and DV* is gettin all the herb votes lol

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

Voted For: DV8

aight both verses was ok but i feel dv8 took it....better punches better everything......reckless did u even try to win?it didnt seem like it....but yea Dv8 gets my vote......

return the favor of an honest vote to my battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722

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aint no hate vote^^^^^^lol

^^agreeded no hate votes your shit was weak battle me next i need a easy win no wonder you was scared

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lol you're such a joke, man, you're jus provin' why your vote was a hate vote. And man, I did this shit in 10 mins, cuz text is seriously fuckin' wack. It ain't fun no more. And I might think about battlin' yo weak ass, believe me I seen yo battles, next week when I'm free.

also LMFAO @ you gettin' like 3 straight losses. dumb herb

Voted For: DV8

Daym, While His Lines Were Streched As Fuck His Punches Came Across Harder To Me...
Just Overall His Shit Seamed Like It Was Better...
If I've Gotta Break It Down More Then Just Ask...
But Ya...
Vote: DV8
.One.

Voted For: Reckless

sorry DV8 normally u come harder, and this time, it's ya structure that's killin' u...

opener: i must say DV8 u took it playin' on his name and a-L.I. ass was very creative..

closer: You like dick up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy
then you shove one in yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy
^Reckless- nice way to end ya verse, kinda funny too.. lol

Structure-wise: DV8 ya need mad work here, ya lines shouldn't be so long that it runs into the next line.. so Reckless gets that..

Flow: Reckless, because the verse seemed simple but actually the words come off as an actual flow.. DV8 ur "flow" in general was lil' stretched too many syllables in only 1/2 a bar.. it makes it hard to follow even tho ur bars rhymed well..

Vocab: DV8 barely, cuz u had mo' complicated words.. some what..

Word Play: Dv8 took this category the creativity kicked in with the link in the first line, and his alias and break-dash segments..

Punches: i'd say Reckless, with focus on G Unit101 line and crew bashin' "low riders", nice lines for dissin'..

Personals: Even, tho, DV8 was tryna take that one, they don't come off as very effective, so no one takes that..

Multis: DV8.. a lil'..

Metas: i say Reckless, this shit's close...

Overall: It's given to Reckless cuz his topics connected well with the verse and flowed well, DV8 i like ur creativity but u need to shorten ya lines a lil' then u str8, long lines make it harder for the reader to stay focused on ur verse and also makes it harder to get the flow correct.. nice battle, u too but that's my explanation, Reckless took this, but damn it was close...
~Lady Fiya~

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thanks fire excellent feedback.....much appreciated........

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left...2 many herbs