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..Kontroverzey.. 1 16.67%
Verbal Phenom 5 83.33%
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Old 11-18-04, 12:36 AM   #16
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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

this wasnt too great of a battle.......both tried some punches that aint connect but some of them did

kontro - u had an ok verse..u had 1 personal that didnt hit too hard..some punches like the light line..ur opener was alright..u did better with the closer..ur 2nd bar was horrible though...overall - 6/10


verbal - u had a good opener..but the next bar jus messed it up for u..it was kinda wack..the parallelogram line was really gay..ur personal about AOD was nice though..ur flow was on point..and ur closer was creative but not very good...overall - 5/10


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Old 11-19-04, 05:42 AM   #17
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This was feedback posted for ..kontroverzey..

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Old 11-19-04, 06:13 AM   #18
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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

..Kontroverzey..

"phenom"inall Tactics Lead To Misery, When Your Facin the Kid....
'Cause The only Time you spittin solid is when Reading my sig.....
/\ 1st line aight 2nd line self-glory

And Dawg, I dont even care How Many Bars You spit....
'Cause One of mine equal up to 1000 of that bullshit.....
/\ again slight self-glory in this bar especially 2nd line again

Spittin Punchelines that'll make you enheirit your wealth....
I was wonderin why he didnt want to tryout for SM,
.....'Cause he didn't want to Emberass his-self...
/\ this was an aight punch/personal however the 3 line rhyme to me hides a stretched structure

Hide Behind the net all you want, We all Know your bitch....
You couldn't produce enuff power to light up a room,
.......even if you turned on the switch....
/\ an aight punch flowed aight but a lil stretched again

DUde set this battle up without my Concent..Now im merkin any prospect...
Im handin It to you, Like Grade A Science projects...
/\ closer coulda been better slight punch but again a lil self-glory

Cosmos aka Verbal Phenom

honest ur a joke...i only wish i'd thought twice...before i clicked accept
look at this net thug...u think u RIGHT, good coz after they'll be nothin LEFT
/\ nice opener good punch

i don't take kindly to wannab thugs, so im using you as a jock strap
i spray venom on ya "paper", look an take notice that you soft "w"rap
/\ self-gory in that bar[/]b

u smart? nah mines a superior mind,spittin straight line like a parallelogram
S.uperior M.ethods are often known to s.uck m.eat, so i'll buy u a leg of lamb
[b]/\ 1st line self-g but 2nd line was a decent punch i liked


i knew that u wern't a born leader...A.O.D fell through pretty quick
i don't normally hit gurls, but u an E-gangsta, so u'll get a full "clip"*
/\ lol at this bar nice punch/personal

i spit deep n from the soul, so i spit lines that'll cause u a heart attack
jus look at ya name, even the debres of letters are tryna escape ya wack
/\ 1st line self-glory 2nd line was a good line for the closer

Damn this was a very self-glorified battle which really in battles don't stand for much really...i think both need to avoid using them...Kontro we cool and all but i really don't think you snatched this battle Verb got ya on flow and structure ya need to lose the 3 line bars this is the 2nd battle where i expected heat and got luke warm instead...both are elevated but on this occasion...Verb Phenom u were lucky to escape wit my vote due to more successful punches and better wordplay and personals...

V/Cosmos...RTF on ma sig vs 3rd-Shift or in my song doesn't matter
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Old 11-23-04, 04:11 PM   #19
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up-up-up and away!! .... vote fuckas .... NOW!
 
Old 11-26-04, 06:40 AM   #20
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Old 11-27-04, 09:31 AM   #21
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Old 11-27-04, 12:04 PM   #22
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LMAO oh my god those verses sucked, however:


Kon:

And Dawg, I dont even care How Many Bars You spit....
'Cause One of mine equal up to 1000 of that bullshit.....

DUde set this battle up without my Concent..Now im merkin any prospect...
Im handin It to you, Like Grade A Science projects...

the only two things that sucked but weren't horrible
you need to work on: punches, flow, metaphors, personals and most of all punches. Yes I said punches twice you basically had none.
2/10


Verb:

u smart? nah mines a superior mind,spittin straight line like a parallelogram
S.uperior M.ethods are often known to s.uck m.eat, so i'll buy u a leg of lamb

actually that was a punchline so it really beat his ENTIRE verse even though it sucked.
you need to work on: punches & flow, the rest will be there you have a grasp on the battling idea. Stop talking about yourself
3/10


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Old 11-28-04, 09:03 AM   #23
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..... up-up-up and away..... get votin on this... NOW!
 
Old 11-29-04, 07:34 AM   #24
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Old 11-29-04, 04:40 PM   #25
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Old 11-30-04, 11:15 AM   #26
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Old 11-30-04, 12:26 PM   #27
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Old 11-30-04, 04:29 PM   #28
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Dammme dope battle by both, Just checking the polls...

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Old 12-01-04, 03:14 PM   #29
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Old 12-03-04, 02:04 PM   #30
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