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12-22-04, 01:37 PM
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anxiety--- we already had this going before you were in the crew, wicked clown added his part yesterday and i added ur name in my verse..... if u want a verse just type one up and post it in the cerw thread.....
 and red bull will edit it like he did for wicked clown
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12-22-04, 01:41 PM
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12-22-04, 01:44 PM
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come on some proper feedback wud be appreciated.....verse for verse stuff
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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12-22-04, 05:43 PM
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IP: 1AF0 6ADD
werd...this shit is fuckin dope. im uppin this shit, dont sleep on this, honest feed please
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12-22-04, 08:24 PM
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there was a forum up in the crew forum for abit....drop a verse in it...i'll edit the post |
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12-22-04, 08:39 PM
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aight...anxiety....ya verse has been added....uppin this shit ...don't sleep yall
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12-22-04, 08:48 PM
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nice shit peoples now The Committee needs to put one out.:thumbup........
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12-23-04, 12:15 AM
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word...uppin for feedback
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12-23-04, 02:42 AM
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Upping.........
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12-23-04, 07:54 PM
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red bull
good verse u managed to name a lot of people and rhyme them along with keeping the flow intact a very good opener... I.Mind good kept shit goin and a good follow up to the introduction, nice vocab and i liked the multies Premanition this had the best vocab out of all parts in my opinion combined with multies excellent part... kwell wasnt feelin this as much as the first 3 but it still brought ya crew love and got the point through ill-grammatix it felt kind of the same as kwells sayin topicals,poetry etc. but it had a higher vocab and better multies ill.logic this was ok in my opinion nothing too good but the same as kwells got the point across and u still reppin ya crew to the fullest chaos eh...the metaphores seemed kind of weak along with the last bar but its ok none the less phatmic in my opinion had the best punchlines of all parts, they were raw and i just thought they were dope good flow and vocab too lady fiya this was good too had the most depth imo and nice wordplay... wickedclown this was my least liked part in the OM in my opinion no hate but i wasnt feelin it, the punches were weak and felt elementary and there was no vocab to back it up but still keep doin ya thang anxiety best flow of the OM, held that aspect down definately and i liked all the lines and last bar was a great bar to end the whole piece overall it was great i enjoyed most of the parts and MAB's got their people in all categories and aspects good shit peace
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12-23-04, 08:28 PM
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Red Bull's rhyme scheme is terrible..
Dynasty and emcee dont rhyme. Skriptz and grammatix dont rhyme. Resurection and perfection dont rhyme. Syllable count son.. rhyming words have to have the same number of syllables.. Thats all i felt like reading.. ..But dont inflate your egos to much now, kids.. |
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12-24-04, 02:03 PM
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feedback.......................................... ...
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12-25-04, 12:50 PM
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shut up bitch, sick of ur bull shit, ur ego is bigger than anyones n u never even battle just talk shit..... thats all uppin
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12-25-04, 01:47 PM
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ummmm... mine had no vocab? ummm read it again it was full of vocab... uhhhh sorry u feel that way.... uppin tho |
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12-25-04, 02:32 PM
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WICKEDCLOWN expose the mentality, makin people see MABs reality murderin bitch made crews like Mortal Kombat fatalitys ^it was weak and mentality,reality,fatality is common...wen i say no vocab i mean like words that i dont see a lot dropin rhymes dramaticly, increasin peeps losses fanaticly shootin lyrical bullets imphaticly, bring RV to its knees i liked imphaticaly and fanaticaly but these were the only non common words in the whole verse...the other people in the collab had more non common words otha Emcees beggin us please, runnin, hidin in the trees niggas must be retarded commin at Mind Above Body no vocab with bullshit loddy doddy, get blown away with a lyrical shotty and sentanced to life like they name was john gotti no vocab leavin our mark forever on this game, we found the fame so fuck what you heard and always remember our name... no vocab so there was only 2 words that i thought were unique vocab im not startin beef jus tellin it how i see it peace
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