IF your play-toh... then you really fucking suck...

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

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goodness people sleep on shit like crazy, vote goodness................!

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Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~




J-walks in battles hyped, riders are bribed not only 2 peep Poll’s
Ur goal to hit charts, make dough.. Only 1 rockin a shelf is Play-toh
Good Punch Nice Personals,Good Openor

Ya record deals worse, of course ur two-number signs an underscore
Place bets, waste checks u can’t afford.. A win if Da Vinci paid u more
Umm Ok Not That Good,But Tha Last Line Wass Ok

Orgy from celebs testin skill, just steal ur results from gangs-star-& shit
RV’s Game it’s proven, when ya rhymes just won’t lose the 101 gunits
That Aint Make Sence & Shit Doesn't Rhyme With G-units Lol

fam sip Nyquil, as inactive feedback I return ya crew it’s reusable napkin
ko’s lie n ur past, punches don’t happen like self-afflict wounds on manikins
Wow Neitha Did That Rhyme,Punch Wass Ok But It Didn't Rhyme

Overall Good Lines Some Didn't Rhyme And Tha Rest Wass Ok,Good Personals And Punches Make Ya Words Rhyme 8/10..................


I retire lady liar who say they fiya,
Cause i'm the mesiah, that makes bitches perspire
Good Multies,Ok Punch And Name Play

Blah at your whole writtens and southern style,
Cause your not from the south, so the draw is a pile,
Didn't Make Sence Weak Punch And Personal

Still you laugh and make audios like you own,
When you have a totally different voice on the phone,
That Wass Weak,And Tha Punch Wass Tired

total bull thats what you represent,
Hence, at the market you always buy the store in polydent
Ok Punch,2nd Line Wass Tired But You Closed It Out Ok...

Overall You Didn't Come Hard Enough Ya Punches Wass Weak Well Some Of Them.You Had A Couple Ok Personals Not Tha Many But You Had Some...

Lady Fiya Took This Had Harder Punches And Personals Thass Why She Took Thiss...........

/V Lady Fiya Rtf.........................

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werd my verse was the worst i have done i think... i need to quit doin shit at the last minute.. lol

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Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~

Damn.. Jpoll...lmao.. You must of been pretty tired man.. I dont really think this needs much of an explenation and I dont really have much feedback for Jpoll because I think you really half assed this battle man..

Lady fiya, I didnt really get some of your punches.. I dont know if they were too complex for me or maybe you just got a different style.. But what I like in text verses is rhymes that are simple, but use well worded punches that hit at just the right part. I aint really into the whole really complex stuff.. I like battle rhymes that'll make me laugh.. Thats bein whats hot in text latly..

This time round, obviously the votes going to Lady Fiya..

Peace.

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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