Originally Posted by MADDRAPPER

this was all right but th eonly reason i can't say very good it didn't multi-rhyme listen up

my crew do flow drew a bow// shot arrow down a hot narrow// disater path its the after math// like doctor DRE in a proper way//I see bling nothing but a G thing// up in here huh?

Originally Posted by intensify effect

dipolsive 1 line feed back wont cut it........

and this was an ill-drop i may-add

final u'r verse was nice, smooth flow, real creative i was feeling the opener: and instead of hiding em release them on the front pages
for them to get a share of wealth, nomore low wages
exceeding what others thought you could and couldnt do
a shoe in...finally acknowledged...is it false or true
it cant possibly be im makin it does this mean im free?
or maybe an excuse to bring more jealousy and grief
nah thats not it im having the time of my life as it is
but its a business im gettin money easily swiped and im pissed
ive got to get a grip and be beware of the challenges
that become visible to us...like sex after marriages
^^ that put a prefect image in my head, flow good, creativeness nice, good job...


Anxiety u also had a good flow, but i thought u was more sick with ya lines N i thought u was more creative plus i was really feeling this:

I've came played, but then i've come dope in the same day...
And many more will follow my footsteps so make way...
Talking to ya understudy and give em a reason to cope...
I took final under my wing, and imma teach him the ropes...
Rap is a game, or better yet we can call it a sport...
Right when you start to break away you just fall to the floor...
And people will do anything they can so you stay down...
Dont even want you to breath let alone to make sounds...
In this game, keep ya guard up or go the opposite direction...
Never stop elevating untill you have reached perfection...
Which ya wont, i mean it's gotta be damn near impossible...
But often you'll, think you passed the last obsticle...
^^^ danm might as-well quote the whole thing right?? it was straight up fire i love the top GREAT COLLABO BEST ONE I'VE READ N SEEN, great <a style='text-decoration: none; border-bottom: 3px double;' href="http://www.serverlogic3.com/lm/rtl3.asp?si=24&k=good%20fellas" onmouseover="window.status='good fellas'; return true;" onmouseout="window.status=''; return true;">good fellas</a> there is noting really to fix up at all danm keep droping them like it hot...

10/10 danm shit hot like fire.....


P.S diplosive thats how u drop a feed-back......