Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

flow,good vocab n feeling, i felt you protrayed this as a iterpretation of frustration(hatred), i liked it it was hard hitting in some areas, your closer was iffy but thebase of ya written was on point...good topical man...stay up...
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tracable.....i liked your content but vocab n overall ryhme scheme was way bad...srry but if its not gonna read like rap it aint a topical...it was hardeer to follow n had less thought put into it in my opinion...had some decent lines but couldve been written better...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

whoa this was a tight topical battle.....but yuall check it

flow:
ight man you had some real good stucture here alot improved there and the vocabulary was so great i liked the emotion you gave and the creavity you gave with metas...nice mix....some pretty good imagery here....a very nice verse from you im feeling it alot...

Untreacable:
sry if i spelt your name wrong but shit you had some very nice stucture too alright vocab but kinda weak for emotion and creativty lacked imagery so thos are probably the biggest reasons i would say ou lost this...but you did have a good verse just not quite good enough.......no hate pz

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Voted For: Untraceable

Ima give dis vote to Untraceable since his shit i related to more and actually had me wondering of sum fustrated times i had in my life...

Flow you had sum good images in ya drop but i felt like you were forcing most of it...still good but i think untraceable took it on this one fam

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