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Old 02-18-05, 07:53 AM   #16
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Old 02-18-05, 08:12 AM   #17
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Links of what?????????
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Old 02-18-05, 08:15 AM   #18
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u need to drop a link with proper feed back....

u must always drop proper feed back on someone else OPEN MIC befor u can open u'r own.....

and when u do open ya own u must drop the link where u gave someone else PROPER FEED BACK....

when i get active i try to enforce it....

u aint have no link....

so u must drop one....



drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166
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Old 02-18-05, 08:42 AM   #19
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lol, aight, but couldnt you just check out NOK Yaself out, By J-DOT, I droppd proper feed on that, an he returned the favor......
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Old 02-18-05, 09:42 AM   #20
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ey yo dis wast tight you stayed on topic, good flow,
good structa and wordplay.dis was hott keep doin ya thing man
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Old 02-18-05, 10:10 AM   #21
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Appreciated homie.....

Uppin for some moe feed all
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Old 02-18-05, 05:10 PM   #22
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Uppin...........
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Old 02-19-05, 03:37 PM   #23
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Old 02-19-05, 07:04 PM   #24
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I liked the flow to it.. but the structure was kinda off.. overall u had some nice lines in there.. some weak ones.. just work on the structure even though it doesnt really matter toooo much if you think about it...

anyways 7/10 bro..
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Appreciated....

But JUST YESTERDAY, I think i finally got the hang of the structure thing, but the feed is HIGHLY APPRECIATED, Thank you again...

Uppin people...
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Old 02-20-05, 11:18 AM   #26
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Old 02-20-05, 01:21 PM   #27
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good multis...stayed on topic well...flow could have been better..second verse was better then the first verse,,,the first verse started too simple an the multis sounded forced...but second verse was proper
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Old 02-20-05, 01:47 PM   #28
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this wouldve been better heard audio... but on text this wasnt to great of a read .. flow was on point... stay up
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Old 02-20-05, 01:49 PM   #29
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Appreciated y'all

Drop a link an ill RTF

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Old 02-21-05, 08:16 AM   #30
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Uppin

Leave a link an i'll RTF

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