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Old 08-15-05, 09:22 PM   #16
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thnx for the feed I left feed on yo soccer kid diss song...
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Old 08-16-05, 01:16 AM   #17
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Old 08-16-05, 08:27 AM   #18
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Old 08-16-05, 06:06 PM   #19
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Old 09-03-05, 12:03 AM   #20
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I feel like uppin this thread.............................
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Old 09-03-05, 12:22 AM   #21
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well i love this version wit bow wow, anywho, i think your vocals need to be upped a lot cuz like i got my headphones turned all the way up and i cant even hear you, your flow needs mad work, it seems like you kinda wrote to some other beat, and you forced shit man, emotion needs a lot more work, quality needs a lot of work as well, and the way you tried to match the hook and shit was bad man, you could made that work better. anyway keep elevatin man.

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Old 09-03-05, 12:24 AM   #22
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thnx for the feed even if I didnt like it I can take critism lol.
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Old 09-03-05, 12:49 AM   #23
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shit was aight fam...ya flow seemed a lil off at times and omarion's hook was mixed just a lil off beat...ya lyrics were decent...only thing that held it back from being better was u were trying to fit to many words into some of ya bars and o's hook being outta place...keep working at it though fam...rtf on "Tell Me"
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Old 09-03-05, 12:54 AM   #24
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it will help if you gave me the link to ya song.
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Old 09-03-05, 01:06 AM   #25
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Old 09-03-05, 01:10 AM   #26
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make a thread of it in this forum and I'll leave feed there
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Old 09-03-05, 01:17 AM   #27
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i just made a thread
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Old 09-04-05, 04:35 PM   #28
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listenin..
was gonna do this also lol
your voice reminds me of some cat i know..
flow is coo,
delivery fits the track i guess
quality needs to be upped tho
not bad track man, keep droppin!
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