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Old 08-18-05, 02:49 PM   #16
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good track... change ur name back diabolic.. lol.. nah but i was feeling this.. the beat was nice.. but got a little repatitive and annoying.. ur verses was coo.. and the hook was catchy.. i'd give this an 8/10
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Old 08-18-05, 04:49 PM   #17
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word...beat is dope...im feelin it...

oh yea...u was wantin to know what beat i used for Outside Lookin in...its Devise on soundclick...

flow is on point well....quality is dope.....kind of a common concept for the song...

hook...is ok...its not really THAT catchy though...but it still sounds good...

lyrically this is good...delivery is very good...

overall...this is a good track man...we should collab mos def....

good drop...no real complaints about it
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Old 08-19-05, 02:32 AM   #18
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Word flow was dope quality sounded good hook was aiight....def a mixtape track overall this was a good track mos def worth tha download...=1=
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Old 08-20-05, 09:16 PM   #19
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Old 08-21-05, 04:21 AM   #20
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Yo Dis is Pretty Good

1st Verse was Good
2nd Kind Fell Off but Still Koo
Overral Its A Nice Song Man, Flow Was Chop

3.75/5=Slighty Above Average
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Old 08-21-05, 03:37 PM   #21
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aight good lookin young D
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Old 08-21-05, 09:06 PM   #22
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love da beat lol i ripped it when i first started rappin styles p right? ahah nice flow like tha shit personally ya voice fitz it perfectly the chorus is hot is as hell and everything this isnt one them trackz u spit lotz of punchez one which u did...so i like dis track best songz i heard all day ahahha good shit
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Old 08-22-05, 11:16 AM   #23
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Old 08-22-05, 04:07 PM   #24
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Old 08-22-05, 04:34 PM   #25
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Yo nice Track, I love the Beat.... Fucken Awesome.. Flow seems on Point for the Most Part, Like others said Ryme scheme could be elevated a bit, but dope drop....
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Old 08-22-05, 06:02 PM   #26
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Old 08-22-05, 06:08 PM   #27
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Im lovin this beat too, quality is really good, likin the flow, lyrics is good im likin the idea youre using....hook is cool jus flow betta and people be singin that in their head lol.....im feelin this....8/10

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Old 08-23-05, 09:55 AM   #28
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iight im listenin ...

beats dope but its wayyyy too common shits like be used and abuised so many times..but back to ya feed...lyrics..simple but have deep meanin behind it i can tell...quality is real good..chorus is nothin outer the ordinary but it fits be well you structered it well..nice work...humm you could of had some nice switch ups in ya verse..instead of that slow flow all the way....ok second verse decent as well if you would of dropped some crazy flow switch and kick a few multi chops here and there shit would of been hot..but good work non the less na'mean ..overall i'll give you a 7.5/10..iight be 1ne..
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Old 08-23-05, 10:32 AM   #29
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aiight jea...this beat is sick...nuff katz dun merked this track..first time i heard it was wit my nigga styles P.. but anywayz

quality:
this quality was syck famz...alot better then wen i last heard your track...on that rapverse mixtape ish......its mixed in nice.....no Pops and adlibs are done prfectly....this tracks on that professional ish...dope

quality overall: 8/10

Lyrics: im feelin the message and what chu sayin...shits deep and its an original topic....the lyrics was on topic...and it had power and some lines had me thinkin...shit wasnt basic you had some nice vocab.....

lyrics Overall: 9.2/10

Voice: you had a powerful voice in this...and it matched nice with the topic and the beat...good adlibs as i said before....you put your heart into this track..shits was fiya.....i could understand everythang you said perfectly....shit was fiya....your flow was on point....it rode the beat nicely....

Overall Voice: 8.2/10

Chorus: the chorus was nice...deep...and it was on topic....good multi's.....and good message...shit was real deep in my mind....

overall chorus: 9/10


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Old 08-23-05, 11:08 AM   #30
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This shit was pretty good, lyrically was good, but flow you kinda stumbled a few times, production quality was so so, i know its been a while since u dropped, so maybe just rusty- not bad all in all- keep doin it... 111
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