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10-25-05, 08:53 PM | #16 | ||||||
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*looks at your verse*
now, you didnt own ME. Sadly, my partner was busy and rushed his verse, so he wasnt up to par. regardless though. if my verse by itself, was compared to yours, I would've won easily the same thing with mines and EC
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10-25-05, 09:07 PM | #17 | |||||||
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lol you really need to get over yourself dude.
oh no, another american tryna diss our country, oh dear, little does he know that navy seals e.t.c are trained by brits, or people who have been trained up by brits, all techniques, excercises e.t.c... all british, want me to continue? |
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10-25-05, 11:35 PM | #18 | ||||||
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wtf does that the navy seals have to do with me bein better than yo wack ass on the mic?
dumbass!
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10-26-05, 02:03 AM | #19 | |||
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ok never heard your music before
i hate this damn beat you say yeh too much. and zone out. and all that wanna be beatboxing. lol. verse - sounds real good on this beat. matches real well. lyrics? well im tired of the gun shooting lyrics and wanna be's gangstas. but its still okay. quality is pretty good. just a little too much echo. overall pretty good. rtf in my siggy |
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10-26-05, 04:38 AM | #20 | |||||||||
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energy as Leady said is good...flow is ok...lyrics are hard to tell quality sounds muffled...but um j-j-j-j-joan out???...lmao...and you thought my pronounciation was bad ha ha ha...
...oh ye i know this beat...it was the beat i used to merk poop a scoop lotty in Got Skillz...duck and cover from that E-Thug E-Thug lmao...E-Style pshh
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10-26-05, 06:24 AM | #21 | ||||||||
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lol cos u was tlkin bout your country bein superior to ours... and you better than me???? i hate to break it to you kid. your flow = average at best my flow = been proven its above average your delivery = energetic, but thats all it has going for it my delivery = again above average(delivery being puttin emphasis on the correct words to help ur point get across better) your presence = yeah it sounds good, but at times sounds un-natural my presence = proven again its above average, allways confident and allways fits the track. your lyrics = played, simple and basic as fuck rhyme schemes and very predictable. my lyrics = far superior to most if not all on the site.. who else is dropping rhyme schemes like me??? aswell as switching it up constantly so its never the same, along with creative lines and original meta's e.t.c come on now kid, you seriously are not on my level, dont get ahead of yourself |
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10-26-05, 06:47 AM | #22 | ||||||||||
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Yo Leady i know ya trying to own him...but please don't hype yaself up...that post looked meh you jus done...jus clown him...he an E-Thug diss him alone on that lol
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10-26-05, 06:50 AM | #23 | |||||||
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im not tryna diss him, im jus tryna open his eyes to the truth.
and he might be an E-Thug, but i know if he stepped in my estate hed get his lights knocked out like new york city |
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10-26-05, 11:25 AM | #24 | ||||||
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beat is overplayed
and wassup with the echoey sound in ur vocals...eh...bad quality on the vocals and ur kinda stiff soundin at the start, even though u are on beat and the vocals could be amped a bit this isn't as good as the other joint I heard elevate 1
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10-26-05, 12:20 PM | #25 | ||||||
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do ANY of yall niggas know me in the street.
how the FUCK do yall know Im a "wannabe gangsta? and Im a "e-thug" wtf is a e-thug exactly if Im a e-thug, than yall are just some e-suburban bitch ass niggas, flat out and leady, if you was ALL of that, then when you dropped yo soundclick I would've MOST DEF put you on my mixtape, but you wasn't. you suck, YOU SUCK REAL REAL BAD. Thats the most simple and basic way I can out it. fat ass pig lookin nigga
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10-26-05, 12:32 PM | #26 | ||||||||
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get over yourself... the reason u think i suck is cos ur narrowminded, that doesnt bother me, but its obvious im better than you... for starters, my music gets more posotive replies than yours, my music got me an offline fanbase, radio plays, plays in clubs, and much more... whats urs got you??? a couple of internet fans and alot of ppl dissin ur wackness. oh no, you called me fat.... WOW, are you THAT desperate to try n get sum browny points???? calling me fat gets u kno where. and you ARE e-thug... real peeps dont chat the shit online, why??? cos they cnt do shit, so why chat it??? i could own you in so many ways its not real... and i can guarantee, if i knew you in the street, you wouldnt be standing upto me, ud be too busy tryna get up off ya arse after i put u down... and thats FACT |
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10-26-05, 01:02 PM | #27 | |||||||
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I Like This.........I Like YOur Emotion In It Could be Upped A Lil...
Flow Is Good But Gets A lil Dull -_- I LOVEEEEEEE This Beat Lol... Hmm....The Echo I Think Is A Bit Much... Pressence Good You DOne Welll On That Delivery-Is Good Like How You Portray Yourself The Song Seem's A Lil Short Though....:/ But Its Nice 8/10 Good One Plz RTF On My True Story Which Will Be Up On RV In About A Hour Lol
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10-26-05, 02:06 PM | #28 | ||||||
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^thanks
this just some shit I did to get out the way. for the rap game he said all you had to do was make a song and i threw this shit together
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