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01-10-06, 12:37 AM | #16 | |||||
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IP: F1FC 4749
kid your rhyming was wack on this. your disses, weren't hitting anyone, and your whole shot at lexi.....was gone with the wind. up your shit then diss peeps
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01-10-06, 01:37 AM | #17 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Shit Off The Hook Dude
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01-10-06, 01:39 AM | #18 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
its makes no sense, learn to make sense,then focus on rhyming.
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01-10-06, 12:02 PM | #20 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
cats talk but can't top this rhyming of superior quality hell yall go to school please
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01-11-06, 12:02 PM | #21 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: F1FC 4749
lol, hey let's battle homie, see if you can top my shit, since you talk big
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01-11-06, 12:06 PM | #22 | |||||||
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
dont waste your time he specializes in ducking i called him out like a month ago he's to pussy
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01-11-06, 12:10 PM | #23 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: F1FC 4749
lol , he's faggot........fag, fag, fag, fag, fag! *The Crowd Goes Wild While Yellin It Out Loud*
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01-12-06, 01:12 AM | #24 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
thais cat make and audio and still got nuked that's a new level all together
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01-12-06, 05:54 PM | #25 | |||||||
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IP: EEE3 F556
lumberjack you suck dont deny it if you actually had confidence and thought you were good you'd battle me
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01-13-06, 06:02 AM | #26 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
hel just proved that when i whopp your ass come on smell the coffee it boiling
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01-13-06, 09:11 PM | #27 | |||||||
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IP: A532 3078
OK i'm gonna up the stakes on this battle if you win you can have all of my RV money but if you cheat to get votes you will get banned
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01-14-06, 02:05 AM | #28 | |||||||
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IP: BF83 47CE
This was kinda wack, to be honest. U had a lot of played rhymes, some basic shit. I didnt see anythin innovative in there. U should work on ur metaphors and punches so that u can construct creative and productive wordplay, cause thats what makes diss tracks hot. Also, try to make ur structure balance ur verse, so that ur lines coincide with each other well. It will enable u to utilize punches easier. Keep workin
~ UD
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01-14-06, 09:08 PM | #29 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
none of these rhymes are played come on underdog you a whack fuck to even say that plus you haven't posted shit let me see what your talk too much ass got and don't bite off my shit come with your own shit like I did son
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01-15-06, 12:23 PM | #30 | ||||||||||
New to RV
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IP: BF83 47CE
Quote:
U dumb or just blind? Look at ur rhymes.. they were cool in the 90's.. now they're not... Examples: "...knock you out... no doubt...", "...truth... roof... proof...", "be.. G" lmfao son u wack Quote:
Im waitin to drop until I can provide links to my feedback... read the rules of this shit mothafucka Quote:
lol.. i been rappin for a long time.. have no need to bite I'll drop somethin soon and rip u apart, so hold onto ur panties until then, wack fool ~ UD
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