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Old 01-10-06, 12:37 AM   #16
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kid your rhyming was wack on this. your disses, weren't hitting anyone, and your whole shot at lexi.....was gone with the wind. up your shit then diss peeps
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Old 01-10-06, 01:37 AM   #17
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Shit Off The Hook Dude
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Old 01-10-06, 01:39 AM   #18
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its makes no sense, learn to make sense,then focus on rhyming.
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Old 01-10-06, 12:02 PM   #20
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cats talk but can't top this rhyming of superior quality hell yall go to school please
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Old 01-11-06, 12:02 PM   #21
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lol, hey let's battle homie, see if you can top my shit, since you talk big
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Old 01-11-06, 12:06 PM   #22
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dont waste your time he specializes in ducking i called him out like a month ago he's to pussy
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Old 01-11-06, 12:10 PM   #23
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lol , he's faggot........fag, fag, fag, fag, fag! *The Crowd Goes Wild While Yellin It Out Loud*
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Old 01-12-06, 01:12 AM   #24
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thais cat make and audio and still got nuked that's a new level all together
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Old 01-12-06, 05:54 PM   #25
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lumberjack you suck dont deny it if you actually had confidence and thought you were good you'd battle me
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Old 01-13-06, 06:02 AM   #26
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hel just proved that when i whopp your ass come on smell the coffee it boiling
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Old 01-13-06, 09:11 PM   #27
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OK i'm gonna up the stakes on this battle if you win you can have all of my RV money but if you cheat to get votes you will get banned
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Old 01-14-06, 02:05 AM   #28
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This was kinda wack, to be honest. U had a lot of played rhymes, some basic shit. I didnt see anythin innovative in there. U should work on ur metaphors and punches so that u can construct creative and productive wordplay, cause thats what makes diss tracks hot. Also, try to make ur structure balance ur verse, so that ur lines coincide with each other well. It will enable u to utilize punches easier. Keep workin

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Old 01-14-06, 09:08 PM   #29
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none of these rhymes are played come on underdog you a whack fuck to even say that plus you haven't posted shit let me see what your talk too much ass got and don't bite off my shit come with your own shit like I did son
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Old 01-15-06, 12:23 PM   #30
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none of these rhymes are played


U dumb or just blind? Look at ur rhymes.. they were cool in the 90's.. now they're not...

Examples: "...knock you out... no doubt...", "...truth... roof... proof...", "be.. G" lmfao son u wack

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underdog you a whack fuck to even say that plus you haven't posted shit let me see what your talk too much ass got


Im waitin to drop until I can provide links to my feedback... read the rules of this shit mothafucka

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and don't bite off my shit come with your own shit like I did son


lol.. i been rappin for a long time.. have no need to bite

I'll drop somethin soon and rip u apart, so hold onto ur panties until then, wack fool

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