lol, i used this beat for a joke song, it's tight tho man, qualitys not great but acceptable....flows on....volume is a bit to low...flows here, delevery is a tad low...yeah, amp ur vocals a bit tho...hard to hear you, lyrics seem ok, from what i could hear..not special but not bad, shoulda done something w the 5 seconds open their, hooks not bad but not much energy into it...u need to noise reduct also...

not bad....

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

appreciate the feed, Ill hit one of your tracks up soon.

Listenin', yeah beat is on the anthem tip fam, nice choice, heard it before but its real tight...aight well first thing I notice is your accent..its not hurting tho..hook is a nice touch, I like the lyrics and the verse is decent too...flow is ookay but the best thing is your emotion, thats real nice...and breath control is good..but what you do gtta work on is the flow and speaking up on some words...quality aint good, if you had better mixing specially on the hook shit wud be alot more nicer...so what I suggest in this song..try work on the presence and the flow..dont pack as many words in and use more small-syllable multis nah mean...nice track I was quite taken away by the effort you made nice...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...687#post2778687

can you rtf plz thanks

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Thanks will hit your link up soon.

Aighhh

I love this beat!!!

Word
Hook?? if it is its nice i like the flow like stop thing nice

flows nice,feelin it...deliverys koo,could come more natural...but that'll come over time,man you mad improved snce i last heard you on RV mixtape,flows real nice...presence is koo,seem confident,qualitys better,could be mixed better...lyrics are really nice man,feelin it..


Good track,jus work on your quality

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OYD MAFIA

I see your hittin up every else but mine ...cud u please rtf

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my bad bro, thought Ill got at yours.
Ill get at it now.

It's koo and thanks alot

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yo that link shit won't work for me. post your SC up foo!

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wipe that jizz from your eyes then son.

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word

^Lmao.

*jizzes*


*runs*

lmao stfu bitch.

aiight peepin

beat on some lord of the rings type shit in intro. lmao iunno... but uhh aiight finally it starts.

hook i think this is, nice emotion and shit. but upp vocals some. But hook nice tho. i like it

first verse, like your delivery and emotion shit's coo. nice flow, lyrics sound coo, but can't really tell much cuz a lil low. but flow fall of a tiny bit, nothing to worry about tho. overall good verse. lol damn this a long verse. I'm guessing just one long ass verse? lol hook again. word nice lil joint man. only big problem was volume. made it hard to hear a bit. but good shit son. I'd give it a 8.5, but since you made that jizz comment you can get a 8/10

EZ

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