I like this beat. Its some smooth lady shit. Only for the grown and sexy.

Versee 1- Not too great lyrically, but vocally nice. I like the energy on this. It goes with the beat, and the flow is on point. Doesnt sound like your rushing any thing. Only thing I'd try to do is come with the better lyrically for the ladies.

Hook-I like this voice on the hook. It goes good, its not too loud, nice! Simple shit, that gets to the point.

Verse 2-Ad libs sound a lil too loud, but flow was not the great. In some places sounds like you was rushing yo flow, but lyrically better than the first verse, I dont like how you ended on a odd bar, but I guess it goes well with the track. Not too much energy.

Verse 3-I like this, because you coming in last, and you coming with that energy better than the other 2 verses, wakes us back up if the sound put us to sleep. yakno?? but, I like this one, not lyrically great, and I dont like how you only spit 8...that was not good.

Overall, this is a hot track, sounds like some smooth old school type track. I like the beat, I like the hook, and I especially like the talkin in the background of the beat. Overall a ok track. 7/10

RTF

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not really leavin feed but i just gotta give paranoid his props. he got much better since the last i heard from him

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