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Peepin now.....

the bell tolls.... givin it that deep... conscious vibe.... aight here you go... beat kicks in with a nice hook... singing... nice tone.... verse touches on A LOT of demons from your past... abuse and shit.... damn.... hook again.... 2nd verse.... more of that deep shit.... diff faces same people... word... my heads noddin more after this hook and goin into the third verse....WHOA..... this flow and the content... haha... trippy man... mirages and shit.... i love this hook, well put together... no over produced you know what im sayin.... the outro prayer was a nice touch... could visualize some one actualy cryin out .... wow.... this is a solid joint... the content reflects a deeper side of Q.... and good for you for ownin your past and those demons... and takin it in stride and over coming man... word up... Props on a well put together track


9/10


-OYD

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One word to describe this track.................DiRtY!!!!!! .....This shi is nice man ....Keep it up

hey rtf here please
http://www.soundclick.com/player/si...id=4848011&q=hi

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beat sounds nice so far on the intro
nice hook pretty good singing smooth
deep shit on the first verse towards the end sad shit but props to you speaking on it alot of people are ashamed of it
you had a ncie concept you are the most unique artist on rv
and you switch up your flow youre abotu the only poerson on ehre whos threads i go into not knowing what to expect
ncie track

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Aiight... Just got home n its 5am so this'll be short bro...................

I was a bit iffy about the hook at the start, but man.. Hey... this is actually pretty tight.. Right, I'm playing this on hi fi and its still sounding a little harsh on the vocal clarity.. Your EQing has gotton a lot better, I think you just need better hardware atm, youve outgrown whatever your using cause your style once the verse kicked in was very pro, jus not pro quality in your clarity department..

The concept you chose is interesting, I've often entertained thoughts like we could exist in a singular concious experience tailored to our own self and placement across the infinite complexity of existance. But I dont exactly think its good to be that self centerered.

One thing with the lyrics I was kind of hoping for more of a proper story to apply this concept to with a final verse peicing together a conclusion.... Or more potent philosophical statements to explain why it is you chose this subject to make a song about cause it could be seen as a comical arbitrary hypothetical peice rather than something bringing light to intricate concepts in life which is what youd be wanting to aim for with a 'deep' track.. In other words, most people would glaze over what your actually trying to get across because your not saying heaps of stuff regular cats would think "ohhh yeah I feel like I'm in the same situation or have empathy towards his feelings or opinions in this track".. But this concept would have been hard to create a sense of empathy with due to the subject itself... so iunno.. You did what you could with what you had to write about.

The beat was good.. suited your subject..... And other than that, I had no problems or comments to add.. This was a tight song.... I wouldnt hesitate to put this on a mixtape or whatever... Good shit dude....

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^^I'm glad Im actually smart enough to understand everything u said...dang BRO!

haa...now that's feedback


preciate it!

And yo, feel free to put this joint on a mixtape...The more exposure the better.





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word, the bells is tight at the intro, but kinda get mixed up with the melody mood, beat killa,hooks aight, hooks deep man, flow's real, nicewordplay and shit,I think I heard a couple of multisif im not wrong, but this shit's illy man
uppin my shit to man thanx http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239139

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thanks dirty d








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Damn chorus is nice..

the new jump off fo 07 huh!!...

verse is direct flows nicelt to the beat ya dig!! lyrics are indepht i have to say it been awhile i listened to some of ya shit cuz of my Inet disconnected n shit but yeah boi u still doing it..haha

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I think the singing seems like it's forced and unclear. Other than that you sound good. Could clean up your dubs in a few places but overall pretty good. Not really my type of stuff but it's good.

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