First off, calm down. he's not even swaying, merely feeding. everyone does that at the intro of their punch. peep me n glock's battle. now....

Everybody on RV thinks he stinks... and know's he just sell-fish...
You wouldnt be "Hot-Dog" even if you had some(a) "Rell's-Ish"... (hell rell)
seems your at a loss of concepts. pretty simple punch
My punches will make your head ache, give em an asprin...
Claimin' I force wordplay?.. dude what the fucks a ass pen?...
heh funny but not hard

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Killin' G'z? that's funny, so I'm pretty sure that you kiddin' me
He could go on a shopping spree...and still not get rid of G's
simple nameplay. decent punch here, coulda been better. s' prob played but iunno lol
All you do is force wordplay with your ass pen
Force so many words...the dictionary is filing for harassment
heh, only punch i really liked in this battle. good shit

v/ Sureloc

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Everybody on RV thinks he stinks... and know's he just sell-fish...
You wouldnt be "Hot-Dog" even if you had some(a) "Rell's-Ish"... (hell rell)
Not really feeling this..
My punches will make your head ache, give em an asprin...
Claimin' I force wordplay?.. dude what the fucks a ass pen?...
Not a real punch to me..

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Killin' G'z? that's funny, so I'm pretty sure that you kiddin' me
He could go on a shopping spree...and still not get rid of G's
Nah shit wack..
All you do is force wordplay with your ass pen
Force so many words...the dictionary is filing for harassment
This isn't even worded right with the concept you were trying for..

Vote - Sureloc, his concepts were better even though his shit needs major work. Killaz you just gotta come with some good personals and concepts next time.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240097
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240096
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240092
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240101

Everybody on RV thinks he stinks... and know's he just sell-fish...
You wouldnt be "Hot-Dog" even if you had some(a) "Rell's-Ish"... (hell rell)
- Not feelin this.
My punches will make your head ache, give em an asprin...
Claimin' I force wordplay?.. dude what the fucks a ass pen?...
- No punch really.

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Killin' G'z? that's funny, so I'm pretty sure that you kiddin' me
He could go on a shopping spree...and still not get rid of G's
-Not amazin but not horrible.
All you do is force wordplay with your ass pen
Force so many words...the dictionary is filing for harassment
- If the wording was better, this would be a nice punchline.

Sureloc's wordin kinda hurt him, but his concepts were much better and funnier and hard hittin. Keep it up both of ya.

v- Sur

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Everybody on RV thinks he stinks... and know's he just sell-fish...
You wouldnt be "Hot-Dog" even if you had some(a) "Rell's-Ish"... (hell rell)
This was like the definition of forced

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Killin' G'z? that's funny, so I'm pretty sure that you kiddin' me
He could go on a shopping spree...and still not get rid of G's
concept is there, but felt the wording coulda been better
All you do is force wordplay with your ass pen
Force so many words...the dictionary is filing for harassment
given his first punch was forced as hell, this actually did hit

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My punches will make your head ache, give em an asprin...
Claimin' I force wordplay?.. dude what the fucks a ass pen?...
idea was okay, but had 2 flaws. First off, ass pen wasn't his wordplay, just a rhyme so this punch isn't even completely true. For 2, u just kinda asked a question and had no punch

Yeah, Sureloc got this.

Vote - Sureloc Holmes