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Old 02-04-09, 08:38 PM   #16
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wow thats two for two now you should start a buisness.
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Old 02-04-09, 08:48 PM   #17
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Been tired, so forest I'm running with a chainsaw at you,
So watch me leave Kris stumped and I ain't talking confused
lol this made me laugh a bit...pretty good line...who uses a chainsaw these days?

dog, u aignt got it with the stick....somebody please slap this kid more
....Or just change up ya career quick adam, like u did on Happy Gilmore
Bitch, u might can golf. But you sure as hell can't hit a puck. I'll hock E!
And honestly Adam, as far as confused....if that was a punch, yeah U lost me.

pretty good set..first bar hit about as hard as the other guys...
and the second one came through...but it wasn't as hard hitting...kind figured you shoulda flipped em in structure..last bare was a little stretched...but good


Comparing me to Sandler? At least those flicks make people laugh,
'Cause every time people see your vids, they just want to kick your ass
ewww.. lol that was wrong..the line was sub-par i think...could've been a cbetter punch..but i agree that the vid...hahaa shit was funny.. lol so it brought it up.. haha

fresh battle..good lines...
good shti...hard to choose for me...both had some sick stuff..
i guess i gotta go with...

v/adam
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Old 02-04-09, 10:22 PM   #18
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Been tired, so forest I'm running with a chainsaw at you,
So watch me leave Kris stumped and I ain't talking confused.

^I wasn't really feeling this punch, I get the concept seems a bit basic, and personally I never like punches with the "and I ain't talking....." endings to me if you have to end you punch with that you could have worded it much better which you could have.

dog, u aignt got it with the stick....somebody please slap this kid more
....Or just change up ya career quick adam, like u did on Happy Gilmore


^setup seemed forced, and by that I mean i think is was forced as hell. the first part of your setup goes with the punch but the second part feels like its just put in there so you could get the gilmore in there and for no other reason as you get to the punch which didn't have much snap to it anyway.


Bitch, u might can golf. But you sure as hell can't hit a puck. I'll hock E!
And honestly Adam, as far as confused....if that was a punch, yeah U lost me.


^Okay, the happy Gilmore thing really wasn't working the last punch and still isn't and I'm still trying to figure out what "Hockin E" is but the concept came across and it was a good feed but the wording of the punch and just the punch overall was lacking IMO

Comparing me to Sandler? At least those flicks make people laugh,
'Cause every time people see your vids, they just want to kick your ass


^1 calling your own punch played in an effort to stop other people from calling it played is lame. I don't think the whole link ting means your punch is played it means your punch doesn't speak for it's self. and so what stubbs can't sing or rap? and the punch basically boils down to people wanna kick your ass, and you used no wit to say it.


v/stubbs for atleast having the half decent feed.
 
Old 02-05-09, 12:37 AM   #19
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^damn son. dope breakdown. Thx for the votes everyone

i think thats 3-3, not sure have to go check again lol
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Been tired, so forest I'm running with a chainsaw at you,
So watch me leave Kris stumped and I ain't talking confused.
This was a good punch. Nice setup and good deliverance

Comparing me to Sandler? At least those flicks make people laugh,
'Cause every time people see your vids, they just want to kick your ass.
this was clever, pretty descent


dog, u aignt got it with the stick....somebody please slap this kid more
....Or just change up ya career quick adam, like u did on Happy Gilmore
This was cool, descent punch

Bitch, u might can golf. But you sure as hell can't hit a puck. I'll hock E!
And honestly Adam, as far as confused....if that was a punch, yeah U lost me.
this was a cool punch as well...


Both combatants has good punches here. I believe that the setups used by Adam were more appropiate and made the punches a tad bit harsher.

Vote - ADAM
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Old 02-05-09, 12:24 PM   #21
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^ Called that before I even dropped.

haha, u funny.....
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Old 02-05-09, 07:53 PM   #22
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Been tired, so forest I'm running with a chainsaw at you,
So watch me leave Kris stumped and I ain't talking confused.
played..^


dog, u aignt got it with the stick....somebody please slap this kid more
....Or just change up ya career quick adam, like u did on Happy Gilmore
^no, lol who seriously watches that
Bitch, u might can golf. But you sure as hell can't hit a puck. I'll hock E!
And honestly Adam, as far as confused....if that was a punch, yeah U lost me.
^lol, pretty funny, unexpected

Comparing me to Sandler? At least those flicks make people laugh,
'Cause every time people see your vids, they just want to kick your ass.
more personal, only reaching^

anyways i felt that Stubbs had a more comical and clever approach, adam brought the harshness.
v/K
 
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How many RB heads are left? Just put the tally for Stubbs at that.
 
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LOL, u been on rb longer then me fucker.
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Old 02-06-09, 01:59 AM   #26
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sway nigga

SWAY


that or fuck a child while your g/fs pregnate


ooo shit!!!

than get the other one pregnate


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dammit. you aignt gon let that shit die. fuck u and adam LOL
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naw son, cuz apprenlty none of your sperm die
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grrrrrr.... dammit. ok i'm just not sayin nothing lmao.

*walks away head down*
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head down? is that the way your mistress was before you blew a load up in her pussy?
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