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Old 02-19-09, 04:00 PM   #16
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Old 02-19-09, 04:18 PM   #17
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Words - You had some interesting concepts but didn't execute them well.
The wording killed the first punch, it could've been pretty dope. The second one was cool but wording hurt it too, an interesting concept though

Coke - Your first punch I didn't feel like it hit hard and was kind of a weak concept. The second punch didn't seem that fresh i've seen a bunch of stuff like that before so that was mehish.

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you do realize, that my first punch was connecting with AA adn NA....one of the biggest steps to becoming sober is listenin and giving yourself ot a higherpower/god


but, s'all good

cool battle Wordz
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Old 02-19-09, 07:56 PM   #18
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I know you only asked being a smart ass but ima tell you anyway.

coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside.

It was basic not very creative its like the concept popped in your head then you stopped there, something like

'when it comes to coke, Im making seriouse moves'
or something along that line, the seriouse moves part would tie well with the put jokes aside, .......but I'm not the only one who said that.


Thanks for being a dick head one way but I actually asked becasue I WAS interested on your thoughts on wording. Personally, now that I read it, I do see something I can change in the setup, not the execution because I re-wrote it like 20 times before I ended up with it.
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Old 02-19-09, 07:58 PM   #19
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you do realize, that my first punch was connecting with AA adn NA....one of the biggest steps to becoming sober is listenin and giving yourself ot a higherpower/god


but, s'all good

cool battle Wordz


Is that what that line ment?? ?? I was fucking lost on it
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Old 02-19-09, 08:02 PM   #20
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lol, yeah, i figured not many people would get that line

i was saying, only person that actually listens and cares what you have to say, cuz your name is Wordz of God...is drug addicts and alcholics, becuase thats like the biggest thing for most addicts is to like become born again christians
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Old 02-19-09, 08:36 PM   #21
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Thanks for being a dick head one way but I actually asked becasue I WAS interested on your thoughts on wording. Personally, now that I read it, I do see something I can change in the setup, not the execution because I re-wrote it like 20 times before I ended up with it.



well my apologies then, but you usually come across as an arrogant guy
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Old 02-20-09, 12:56 PM   #22
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Punches : Philly
Structure : werdz
FLow: werdz
Metaphors: Didnt really see any
NamePlay: Philly
Concept:Philly
Exectution: Werdz

I tihnk Philly took the most important catagories in this one but this was a close battle

Vote:Philly.
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you do realize, that my first punch was connecting with AA adn NA....one of the biggest steps to becoming sober is listenin and giving yourself ot a higherpower/god


but, s'all good

cool battle Wordz



Well aware bro...
 
Old 02-20-09, 05:55 PM   #24
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Old 02-20-09, 07:52 PM   #25
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Punches : Philly
Structure : werdz
FLow: werdz
Metaphors: Didnt really see any
NamePlay: Philly
Concept:Philly
Exectution: Werdz

I tihnk Philly took the most important catagories in this one but this was a close battle

Vote:Philly.


lol @ the inadequecy of this vote

Did you do it with a fucking crayon or some shit.
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Old 02-20-09, 07:59 PM   #26
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dude, stop swaying the votes and bitching

its getting 04ish
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Old 02-20-09, 08:31 PM   #27
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lmao @ 2v vote..

Words is full of gimmiks, enough of the talk bro i think we've all had it
Cuz only people praisin Words of God is Alcholic's and drug Addicts
^ehhh.. decent..
yep, this dude's from 04, and i think we can till you aint battle in a while
Cuz Words your style is completely fucked like virgins doing doggy style
^lmao noooo. no

his crews full of fags..
no pussy for miles so I gaurantee that u'll die..
besides, coke would rather chase Adam n Jon then push Suicide.
^bleh, i seen the wordplay just not connected well..
N' no one takes u for real
this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized
coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes asid
^mehh... seen this

v/coke
seemed a bit more direct..
 
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lol @ the inadequecy of this vote

Did you do it with a fucking crayon or some shit.


Suck a DIck, you wouldn;t have complained if i voted for you.. and if you got problems we can take it to the battle thread homeboy. jus let me know
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Old 02-20-09, 09:10 PM   #29
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1. I never sway..ever and if you can find a battle where I have swayed in, in any league... then it would be miraculouse.

2. you ignorent piece of no body(SnoCap), I definetly could careless that you vote for either me or him becuase you hold no merit and Im not so petty and rediculouse to think like a whiny little kid.

3. Your vote did not show that you even read the verses because your vote did not leave adequet feed back to be considered as a real vote.
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Old 02-20-09, 09:15 PM   #30
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what your doing right now...thast swaying

stop bitching


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