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Jackmioff - Well...True its an ‘Open Mic’ so its up to you to take the subject and use it, which you did. But you did it in a battle verse, which is, well...boring kind of. We have a battle league as well. A battle verse in a Topical Open Mic League just seems so uncreative.

Will’Con – Wasn’t to bad. The story wasn’t great, its been used a lot. You did have some nice lines though. “ praying for forgiveness as his life spilled from his head”
“ My visions blurry can’t breathe, I’m wheezing try to feel for indicator of life but I cant feel my heartbeat.”
- Those were your best lines, in my opinion.

So... Vote – Will’Con

P.S. “there” is referring to a place. “their” is the word used for someone’s stuff...thought you should know.

A battle verse in a Topical Open Mic League just seems so uncreative

^^How..

An How The Fuck Was This A Battle!

A battle verse in a Topical Open Mic League just seems so uncreative.

^^ I didn't know it was A open Mic leauge.. I thought it was a Battle Topical Leauge.. but yo, it is a battle right? I did follow the topic.. an therefore... did he metion my name? no

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You want me to write poety? When I can do that in school. BLAH,
This Leauge is retared. 1-1 upping for some votes

I'll explain this...
a topical battle simply means that both emcees write verses pertaining to a topic... creatively... not directed in any way towards the other mc. The Battle part comes into play because the verses are voted on and a winner is declared. So if you want to call it a topical tournament or whatever do what works for you, but the purpose is not to "dis" the other emcee. Don't worry too much Jack, you weren't sure what was going on... now you're aware for next week.

That being said...
both verses sucked.
I didn't like the direct battle approach but he wasn't sure of the purpose. You incorporated the topic however and it kinda worked.

Will- your verse was terrible man. The lines were so drawn out I had to read it like a five year old for it's rhyme scheme to work. And that same story stuff is boring... it's really boring and I didn't care for it.

Don't mean to be hard on you but it doesn't get across when I'm nice.
Jack won this.... and i don't know how.

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iite will con got this simply on the fact that jack didnt follow the topic as good an thats wuts its mostly about iite
no hard feelins jack----mioff
dag i like that name haha

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

sry wilcon im not allowed to post a vote in the polls for sum fucked up reason ima try to get this shit fixed for the last fuckin time

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

yo tis battle or wateva it is was screwed up in a multiple ways but fuck it ima vote

jack u went off on wat u were supposed to do even though u wrote bout tha topic tis was supposed to be in a openmic format just becuz it sayd topical battle doesnt mean u have to diss tha opponent tis is to see who stays on topic out of tha two and u went off by dissin him but dont get me wrong ur verse was nice but just wrong in tha format

wilcon gets my vote for stayin on task wit tha battle he stayed on topic and did not turn it inot a diss so he got my vote

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Will'Con gets my vote for following the format.....an tellin a story....topical verses "dissin" the other cat gets real old real fast..........

Vote - Will'Con

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