ok, im gonna have to disagree with ruth on this one

x - i thin kthat you can do better than that...... that verse was pretty weak..... no hate, just elevate

violent - urs wasnt much better, you need to calm down with the multies dawg...... too many can be a bad thing...... otherwise good punches..... you could use some elevation too tho

vote = violent

hit mine up..... needs soem votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1744#post541744

Why Is Crew Voting?


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yes, i thought since ruth voted for crew, you wouldnt mind if i voted against my crew.... i honestly think that you got this tho

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common lets get some voes this is gettin slept on soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much people please vote ill vote on urs just vote on this and drop a link................1

shit I'ma vote cuz ya'll ain't gettin none regardless, and I ain't got no beef wit you, so I'm doin this honestly. Plus it doesn't say no crew votes in the first thread.

X- yeah some of you lines seemed really played, and another few seemed like setup filler. But you did have a good flow and a few decent punches.

Violent- I think your verse would been a hell of alot better if you didn't put so many damn multies in, cuz they took away from the flow of the verse, especially when you put stuff in parenthesis. I think if you avoided puttin so many multies you would have definately won, cuz some of the words u was linkin didn't even sound right together.

Vote- X

elevate ya'll

X- Taking "stressful shits" is the only way he "drops his aggresion"/
Pausing progression, tha only way he could form nice flows is if he copied my sections/

Nice punch good wordplay

I gotta this kid wit a scope, he done turned his back on hope/
He talks about "flippin dimes", hahaha, i've been handlin whole bag-fulls of dope/

LOL ill shit

You came out of the closet, finnaly you battled someone/
Must've took you 2 good weeks to come to the conclusion, and now it's done/

Iight shit

Now as he's dead-on-the-ground, walkin up, I peeled back his skin/
Take him to the lab, get him cloned, so I can beat his ass again/

Good wordplay weak punch

Defeating me's a 100 yard field goal, that goal is undoable/
yor whack ass being on a rap board's like a clown at a funeral/

Nice multi's and iight punch

mater fact, put on a black suit, if you god im bout to kill lord/
said you toped the charts cause you stood on top of a bill-board/

Good flow, and straigt punch

This guy aint gangsta, when he's in trouble he seeks help/
only time this guy is strapped is when he's wearing his seatbelt/

Iight

I bout to mutilate your body and have you join the dead/
you like a circle in this battle bitch you have no edge/

Iight closer could of been way better tho, overall verse a 6.8/10

VW- Your Verse had nothing but Played-Con(cepts), like Reality-Shows...All talk and no 'Personal'ity-Flows.../*
Now your Fatetility -is-Close..Kid you all Net..cause it Real(life)alty-you-Blows..you'll neva have the same Tune-on-Mics..like when your Nationality-Goes..//**

Iight, descent wordplay

Youll neva be in Lime-Light even if ya Mentality-Glows..X-cute? Naw you Just some ugly/wack Kid your Dad-Composed…
I feel Sad-to-Expose you..You an Garbage Nicca..like Watches getten Recycled..its your Time to get Diss-posed...//(He spit Played Shit)

That was choppy not feelin your flow

Xecution take all Fist-Poses..He taking nothing but Nap-Shots..ya Threads r not get'n Felt..like Gap-Spots.../*
I Tap-Twat..and you all Pussy...Your punches I aint See’n...Grab your Hands..and show you how I Snap-ur-Shots...//**

Iight punch, descent wordplay

I'll Slap your Rhyme-Book..guarateed nothing But Recycle-and-Undress Lines Fall-Out.../
Personals? You must Ran-All-Out..so Fuck-You..and Your Crew..cause after this Battle it’s the Whole Warlord Call-Out...//

Nice punch and good flow

Yall Saying is Wrong..more like "We Came We Saw .and We Jacked You Up"..so Admit it you Took-that-Verse.../
Your Set/Click is Dead..like I Shooked-yall-Hearse...you Gay-to-cator-aid(Gatorade)..cause you put nothing but Dicks..in ya Mouth to Quench-ya-Thirst...//

LOL nice multi and punch

X? I choiced to Bitch-you-First,.of Many War-Lords..You Gay..you do nothing But go After Hunks(Guys) like Car-Horns.../*
You Lines-in-ya-Thread..r Far-from-Worn..my Punches..bring Damage to your Head..like an Star-was-Born //**

Ok not really feelin tho

Your Bars-get-Torned..Xecution? you Name-is-Wrong...ya Lines r Straight Played..like an Game-host-in-a-Thong.../
What type of nicca Spell his on Name-Wrong?..you Rep Shit..cause Toilets were yall Name-Belong...//(Him/and his Crew)
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Iight

You get Crossed-and-Hook..you just an Stitch-Creation..you Did it..you Copy.but your shit is Over Done..cause Bitch-you-Pasted../
Your Shit-is-Wasted..24-7? You Bout to be Closed..this Punk..think He-Eaten-Me..when its Shit-he-Tasted..//

Good closer and iight wordplay at tha end, overall verse a 6.5/10
Vote=X

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Tha Count is at 1-0 him

Thats an Autamatic Rule : No Crew Votes : And ALso Its At The Beginning Of My Verse : I Said No Crew Votes : So No Crew Votes : Damn : Can Yall Fukk'n Follow Rules :
Also If Your His Crew Dont Even Think About Dropp'n Another Vote Down : Why? No Crew Votes/ Also I Diss The Warlord in The Verse so Why Should Yall Vote Count also?


>>Pm's Mod<<

Gotta go against the grain... Wordz came better...wordplay was smoother and his verse was more advanced...some of the multi's were pushing it and could have been left out, but doesn't get you an L though...X's verse was mediocre to me...could have been better...only line I liked out his verse was the Bag full of Dope line...other than that, everything else was bland...

Vote: Wordz

Check my shit against Feeble Minded and my Tag Battle against Nuclear Weaponz and Dizzy D...its a wrap...

Feeble Minded:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=57205

Tag Match:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=56933

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