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Old 06-17-03, 01:06 AM   #16
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alright, 4-2 so far.. this one will be close shit...
good luck man, both were very nice drops...

nothing but respect for my boy 13...
 
Old 06-17-03, 01:10 AM   #17
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13 and Sureal were Both Friggin Ill
That was a crazy ass alter ego battle
But i gotta go with 13 On this one
my vote go's to 13

Mad Man: Your vote will not count until it is explained better. 4-2 Sureal

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Old 06-17-03, 02:41 AM   #18
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i disagree....................i think sureals too k this.................he had more heart...........and defiantly a more touching story........................also pretty original...............funny how most topial battlesend in suicide................
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Old 06-17-03, 11:08 AM   #19
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alright, 5-2 so far... uhm .. yea i think the suicide add alot more emotion at the end of the verse, like my last two lines hooked alot of people....

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Old 06-17-03, 02:00 PM   #20
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good battle....but i think its gay how mad is taking my votes....either way.....its the internet.....good luck dawg..........1
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Old 06-17-03, 02:23 PM   #21
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Aight. I read this shit over and over. I liked both of the verses. I was feeling 13th a little bit more. I think it went to the topic better. No doubt there. That was a great topic for both Emcees. Personally I think 13th took this shit easily. He rode on the topic with out getting off of it. His whole thing had my attention.

Vote= 13th Disciple


----I liked surreals whole view. the end was tight and it was deep. ^^^13th took this with jus momentem. i felt it, i imagined it, i lived it. vote=13
 
Old 06-17-03, 02:25 PM   #22
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wow...if you ever wanted to read a good topical
battle this was it.....shit you guys, that fuckin masterful..

13th - I liked ure shit. . very complex to a simple mans eye
however. I figured halfway through your story what the ending
was..a nice twist none the less

Sureal - Damn im glad i dont have to go against you again...
your shit didn't have the complexities that 13ths had, but still
very easy to understand and read..the lines were a littile simple
but the story was just addiciting...by your second to last
paragraph i knew the ending tho..shit this is fuckin tough

tha break down. . .

13th Disciple;

Flow: 7
Vocab: 9.5
On topic: 9
Wordplay: 6
Shock effect: 7.5
Opener: 6
Ending: 8

Total : 53 pts

Sureal ;

Flow: 8
Vocab: 7
On Topic: 9.5
Wordplay: 7
Shock Effect: 9
Opener: 7
Ending: 9

Total : 56.5 pts

Vote - Sureal

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Old 06-17-03, 02:26 PM   #23
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BOTH WAS GOOD BUT 13TH STAYED ON TRACK, HIS LINES WERE LONG & IT SEEMED BETTER SINCE IT WAS READ IN TEXT, SUREAL ENDIN WAS GOOD BUT HIS OVERALL TOPIC WASNT AS ON POINT AS 13TH'S
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Old 06-17-03, 02:29 PM   #24
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6-4...actually 6-5...but whos counting..lol........appreciate the voting yall.....keep em coming............................................ ......1
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Old 06-17-03, 04:57 PM   #25
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both came hard on this shit...i was feeln how sureal broke it down into like chapters and shiit, that was nice, but 2 me 13th..had a much better flow & the alter ego was more G u kno? lol...but naah seriously...13 & sureal both battled good..but when i read this by 13th..he won it..
"one half luvs the kiddin and playin but concentration and
medication kept the beast for a moment encaged/percieving an
incredible act of violence from words changin into a monster when
this hulk is enraged"

shiitz heated!!

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Old 06-17-03, 05:52 PM   #26
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Hey 13, wouldn't you be pissed if someone said
"Close battle, but ima give it to Sureal"
with nothing else said. Those votes need to be
explained.
Sureal - 6
13 - 5
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Old 06-17-03, 06:03 PM   #27
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I Feel Ya Mad....I Ain't Bitchin...lol...........This Is A Good Battle.......
Keep Them Votes Commin............................................ .................1
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Old 06-17-03, 07:36 PM   #28
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ok , yup 6 -5 so far, but i did not understand
g-unit brooklyns reason...

HIS LINES WERE LONG & IT SEEMED BETTER SINCE IT WAS READ IN TEXT

it would obviously be READ in TEXT ... and he wins cuz his lines
are longer?

w/e you can keep that vote, but that juss' seems fucked...

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Old 06-17-03, 09:07 PM   #29
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how bout we just take all of my votes?.....6 surreal 0 disciple......i don't think so tim....lol.............up......................... .........................1
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Old 06-17-03, 09:54 PM   #30
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!3th Was really Good a great story
the concept was great

But....Sureals was a lil bit better
Was undecided till Sureal's ending
was tight good structure an i liked
the way you preceived it...

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