well i was key-styling it and it just was kinda flowin out of my brain... so i figured why stop... i never even counted how many lines i had... but good luck

Hatred runs the air and problems lead to violence
Violence leads to weapons and weapons lead to silence
^^^thats a fuckin dope line

yea i kon...that was my best line....

Vote : ILL-Mental

This was very close to call.......I read the verse from Sonn and was like damn.....thats gon be hard to beat..........you had some nice creativity......and your flow was nice.......there were some flaws but over it was tight

Then i read mentals sick...........nice creativity, nice theme.......your close was dangerous.....you were jus too much for him

Thats why ILL got my vote

Alright, I have just read both pieces and heres my thoughts.....


Sonn......

The depth of your poem was what really drew me to your piece....no fantasy BS but complete realism in itself.... i really had an easy time understanding the piece along with following the flow..heres a line that got me nicely.....

"Violence leads to weapons and weapons lead to silence
God created us equally and man has taken it for granted
Then times got rough and people cried to god..they chanted
People never see the glory of what they have until its taken"

Total truth sadly...things are recognized and changed through consequeces which leads to misfortune and hopefully eventually some sort of happiness.... Great piece Sonn

Ill.....

Your piece to me was less indepth but still held a good truth/meaning.....Lives can be changed drastically just with one small sequence.....which can turn to drastic measures....sadly some relations aren't sought on the same view point....Its a guessing game...and it sucks....nice work


vote: Sonn-In Time

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^^finally....deacon someone whos all about topical and poems...we finally get someone who is actually for this to vote...everyone else is "follow the leader"....atleast deacon actually read this shit

2-1 U....uppin

yeha.... whatever you say lol... just dont be a sore loser if you dont win... and i wont either

i dont care...i mean i just want people like camarac...evolve...sureal...and deacon to come in cuz they kno this shit...but w/e...its just a rap site so it dun matter...uppin

Both Verses Sucked. Almost Made Me Puke.

And That's Real Talk...

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^^^best vote yet