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Old 11-09-03, 11:33 AM   #16
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Werd.. Time To Go Voting For Me..
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Old 11-09-03, 11:33 AM   #17
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Dont know about this one.................mad close, i'm gonna have ta come back lata and read em again, stay real, peace, 1
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Old 11-09-03, 12:43 PM   #18
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Fgee...Your verse was long, it tended to become boring at times, but overall it came out nicely. You had some great lines, used good imagery.

Auspicious...You had a dope piece, not as long, but short and sweet, straight to the point, and your imagery and flow came out strongest.
Vote-Auspicious, because his verse came out as powerful yet it was simple. Fgee, you had a great verse, but just a few little things bring your quality down, and thats where Aus won..
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Old 11-09-03, 01:16 PM   #19
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I thought this was alot closer than what everyone else said, I was feeling fgee's verse but auspicious's lines kept me more interested & the flow slightly edged fgee. .

Chow!. . Vote-Aus
 
Old 11-09-03, 11:03 PM   #20
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I guess im a sheep...

Aus...
I must say your flow made it a very easy read...the imagry was well used and the word choice definetly made this a great piece

Fgee...
I thought your piece was good too...nothing bad...all aspect were good...just not better than Aus's verse...Its like being in the NBA during jordans heyday...you may be great but he is just better...

vote - Auspicious

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Old 11-10-03, 05:47 AM   #21
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Aus-very well written piece good take on topic
smooth flow thruout that helped make it a very
enjoyable read. cant really say anything wrong about this one.

Fgee- sick imagery. metaphors where very dope, The only knock
i might have on your verse is the flow to it it was longer at the top and at the bottom you seemed to rush it to finish. it all ofa sudden it slowed down and the lines werent as long throwing the only bad thing of your piece. other than that it was very damn good piece


-vote-AUS on a very cose one..
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Old 11-10-03, 11:43 AM   #22
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Aus for real! He had a better story, i liked the ABAB, nobody does that anymore... and he just came iller like he fucked a girl and he had aids... i mean this dude needs an iv..
 
Old 11-10-03, 12:03 PM   #23
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what the fuck is with the herbs voting in here...
fuck off u faggot^
 
Old 11-10-03, 01:56 PM   #24
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lol.. Wow
 
Old 11-13-03, 08:04 AM   #25
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lmao
how fucking gay
auspic is a cheating fucker.....
he shud be dq'd from this championship..if he hasnt already been
and then there will be no holder of the title and i can battle next week in it with whoever
 
Old 11-13-03, 12:16 PM   #26
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wow...um dont know what to say..hmmm guess we just move on...

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Old 11-13-03, 05:01 PM   #27
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No, Auspicius retains the title for this match, but is stripped of it from now on. The #1 Contender match decides who was the champion.
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