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Old 11-19-03, 02:00 PM   #16
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Son, I fathered ya style.. and even your mother loves me...
This kid only sees Chrit.. when I get weekend custody...
...lol, nice...

Quick to give dimense his first loss... But from my alias he already had one...
And fuck a step ahead of Dimense... Try a whole damned marathon...
hmm.. not feelin as much

How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
avg.

Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...
A style that weak should be deemed illegal... Like Divinitys' web cam...
haha... good

Scared to death... Dimense brings new meaning to internet leaks...
Another poser disposed of.... Hey Evolve...
...How bout a challenge next week?
ok..

Ya Under n alias u beat me.. only cuz u needed 10 ppl to help..
U keep changing sn's ..Still.. cant make a Name for Yourself..?
played a little.. but ok .

So he Bites on HHD..claimin switch’d styles.. quit clingin to Fables..
Chrits Kinda like Goldie Locks..
Cuz he’s Stealin every thing I bring to the Table..
lol.. good..

Ur like bulletproof glass.. Actin hard but chrits see Thru
with Audios so wack..that even the Mic Spits back at You..
nope . nice try but not feelin it

Its sad but Tru^..even Begg’d Orgin Ill for a crew Spot..
U Legendary?..How
Ya Cd couldn’t even get over 18 Sales at a Porn Shop….
lol.. little above average

Ur not Black or White?..like johnson..ur a Race Reject..
Savor this Las Breath
Cuz..Ill make u allergic to Oxygen..n watch u Breathe to Death
no ^

overall -

chrit : pretty much throughout this was an average verse. nothing stood out terribly well.. nothing bad either. average, maybe a bit above average.

dimense: you had some filler lines that were average. you came with two lines that stood out.. but you also came with a few lines.. that... dug a hole and buried themselves.. like the closer.
pretty much made both of your verses average.

meh.. dimense coula taken this by not putting up a few wack lines.. and chrit coula taken this by putting up a few "wow" punches.

sorry. after breaking this down i really can't vote.
 
Old 11-19-03, 04:44 PM   #17
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Vote Chrit

Hes punches were harder. It was a close battle but Dimense had a couple played punches and Chrit had a wack finisheer but overall Chrit wins
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Old 11-19-03, 07:03 PM   #18
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Chrit:
Son, I fathered ya style.. and even your mother loves me...
This kid only sees Chrit.. when I get weekend custody...
...Dope opener ... Ill wordplay ...
Quick to give dimense his first loss... But from my alias he already had one...
And fuck a step ahead of Dimense... Try a whole damned marathon...
... This was aight ... Not great ...
How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
... Eh ... Aight ...
Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...
A style that weak should be deemed illegal... Like Divinitys' web cam...
...LMFAO ... Dope ass line ...
Scared to death... Dimense brings new meaning to internet leaks...
Another poser disposed of.... Hey Evolve...
...How bout a challenge next week?
...Nice finisher ...

Dimense
Ya Under n alias u beat me.. only cuz u needed 10 ppl to help..
U keep changing sn's ..Still.. cant make a Name for Yourself..?
...Eh ... Aight opener ... But not true ...
So he Bites on HHD..claimin switch’d styles.. quit clingin to Fables..
Chrits Kinda like Goldie Locks..
Cuz he’s Stealin every thing I bring to the Table..
...This was aight ...
Ur like bulletproof glass.. Actin hard but chrits see Thru
with Audios so wack..that even the Mic Spits back at You..
...This was blah ...
Its sad but Tru^..even Begg’d Orgin Ill for a crew Spot..
U Legendary?..How
Ya Cd couldn’t even get over 18 Sales at a Porn Shop….
...Weak...
Ur not Black or White?..like johnson..ur a Race Reject..
Savor this Las Breath
Cuz..Ill make u allergic to Oxygen..n watch u Breathe to Death
...Weak finisher...

Over All

Imma have to go wit Chrit on this battle ... Cuz he juss came better in all aspects of this battle ... Harder hittin' punches ... Wittier lines ... Dimense didn't seem to bring that much back at him ...

Vote : Chrit
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Old 11-20-03, 12:23 PM   #19
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Chrit's Verse

Son, I fathered ya style.. and even your mother loves me...
This kid only sees Chrit.. when I get weekend custody...
^Lol

Quick to give dimense his first loss... But from my alias he already had one...
And fuck a step ahead of Dimense... Try a whole damned marathon...
Lol, but second line coulda been worded better.

How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
^Dope Fuckin Personal

Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...
A style that weak should be deemed illegal... Like Divinitys' web cam...
^Lol, again

Scared to death... Dimense brings new meaning to internet leaks...
Another poser disposed of.... Hey Evolve...
...How bout a challenge next week?
^Disappointing compared to the rest of your verse

Dimense's Verse

Ya Under n alias u beat me.. only cuz u needed 10 ppl to help..
U keep changing sn's ..Still.. cant make a Name for Yourself..?
^No one else has been penalized for slight feeding, neither should you...nice punch

So he Bites on HHD..claimin switch’d styles.. quit clingin to Fables..
Chrits Kinda like Goldie Locks..
Cuz he’s Stealin every thing I bring to the Table..
^If that wasn't fake...damn. 2nd line was still dope

Ur like bulletproof glass.. Actin hard but chrits see Thru
with Audios so wack..that even the Mic Spits back at You..
^Not feelin the first line...second was lol.

Its sad but Tru^..even Begg’d Orgin Ill for a crew Spot..
U Legendary?..How
Ya Cd couldn’t even get over 18 Sales at a Porn Shop….
Dope punch, poorly worded

Ur not Black or White?..like johnson..ur a Race Reject..
Savor this Las Breath
Cuz..Ill make u allergic to Oxygen..n watch u Breathe to Death
^LoL, nice

Overall: Awesome battle, the kind people like to read a couple times(Which I did). Dimense might have taken this if it weren't for the fake personal and that poorly worded porn shop punch.

Plus, this line from Chrit killed it:

How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...

^Especially hard hitting due to the Axe E. Um vs Mystery~Murdera match ending up being Dimense vs MM. Great punch and dope battle guys.

Vote ~ Chrit.
 
Old 11-20-03, 02:16 PM   #20
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ehhh...seems to me Chrit got this for more original punches and personals....Dimense looked as if some parts of his verse played off of Chrits' verse....which isn't too cool....but Dimense did have soem good personals....u both had good vocab...nice flows...and equal structures....but here's the line that killed it...

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From Chrit:
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...


that's y Chrit gets my vote...he had more humor..better wordplay...and original punches....nice battle from u both though....no hate...just a vote...

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Old 11-20-03, 03:04 PM   #21
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Old 11-22-03, 06:53 AM   #22
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Gotta say I think Dimense came with the personals which
in the end took this battle. The biting - table line. And begin
Origin Ill line did it for me.

vote - Chrit
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Old 11-22-03, 07:01 AM   #23
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did you mean vote dimense, or chrit came with the personals which in the end took this battle?

lol
 
Old 11-22-03, 07:03 AM   #24
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yea ^^^^ what she said

vote - dimense
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Chrit Wins & Retains The Title
Dimense Loses

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