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Old 09-28-04, 06:25 PM   #1
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~{ExClusive}~ isn't to bad, with some elevation he will be pretty dope. he in for coast wars and probably be elevated a lot by then. i think hes an allright mc...id say yes to letting him in
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Old 09-28-04, 06:27 PM   #2
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(((((((((((((((((((((full))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))
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Old 09-28-04, 07:18 PM   #3
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w/e yall are gonna ignore me...imma find somewhere else to go...
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Old 09-28-04, 08:39 PM   #4
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Right now we are basically full...but there are always exceptions which basically means we will still take the best of the best that tryout......what it also means is that we WILL NOT go searching through links and shit...so if your serious post THE ACTUAL VERSE and not a link to the verse in your thread and we will decide...NO MORE LINKS or your verse IS NOT getting looked at.....thank you
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Old 09-28-04, 09:00 PM   #5
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aight but im not gonna get in anyway but ill come back after coast wars when im better
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Old 09-29-04, 11:13 AM   #6
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Shit,I know Da Vinci,I sent him a PM and he isnt responding!!
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Old 09-29-04, 02:39 PM   #7
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Right now we are basically full...but there are always exceptions which basically means we will still take the best of the best that tryout......what it also means is that we WILL NOT go searching through links and shit...so if your serious post THE ACTUAL VERSE and not a link to the verse in your thread and we will decide...NO MORE LINKS or your verse IS NOT getting looked at.....thank you
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Old 09-29-04, 10:54 PM   #8
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Poetry Drop:

A Spotted Reality

I awoke from sleep to find that I was a beautiful leopard.
Confused about reality and which life is the dream.
I shed my thoughts of humanity and embrace the beast.
Blinking away the black spots of confusion for those of life.

My entire body surges with vitality that I never knew before.
I have just awoken and yet I could outrun most anything.
Coiling my back legs I launch like a bullet from a gun.
Running for the sheer joy of the wind in my face.

I am a yellow streak on the golden plains of my home.
The rushing air cools the sweat glistening on my flanks.
The ground has become a slight sensation under my feet.
As I melt in with my surroundings…and nearly fly.

My run slows and I pad over to the shade of the treeline.
Where cool forest meets hot plain I come to take my rest.
My claws leave divots in the tree bark where I climb up.
Curling up on a tall branch to watch and make my rest.

Sleep comes in a lazy way, making me dopey.
But my half-lidded eyes suddenly pop open.
I feel a rumbling in my huge lithe belly.
So I watch the movement on the plains and wait.

I leap from my branch and land lightly on my feet.
I have a target, and I begin to run again, quickly.
The gazelle sees me and begins to run also.
It has no chance, to it I’m the fastest thing alive.

I leap and my teeth make contact with its neck.
Our bodies roll over and over in the dirt of the plain.
I spring up to my feet and my prey lies still in the dust.
Taking the corpse in my teeth, I head back to my tree.

My belly full, I lean my head against the cool bark.
I am the pinnacle of my evolution, nothing can compare.
And as sleep sneaks up on the greatest of hunters.
I wonder, will I be on two legs when I wake tomorrow?


Battle against Wicked One:

Fuck a “Wicked One,” I spit devilish lines with “Wicked Tongues”/
Kid I really only had to show and drop a verse to leave you outdone./

Son, I cause more “throwed backs” than the dude in your signature./
The whackest MC I’ve seen, so anti-ill that I’ll call this ~kid a cure~/

Leave with wins.You claim wickedness but I leave Satan appeased with sins/
My punches leave opponents heads spinnin faster than your “avvy’s rims.”/

BOOM! Man my sick lyrics “rock your box” you’re ~far from top.~/
You only “C(See) Rhymes” when I paste your eyes to “Hop On Pop”/

Step in my way and I’ll slash ~straight through,~ I’ll flat ~slay you~/
When you get on stage is the only time people are yelling “DJ WHO?”/
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Old 09-30-04, 07:45 AM   #9
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hey
When im wit my man i know how to treat him,
I popped his cherry like my others billy and liam,
Im a killer mc and a homo thats not bad,
I like gays and bitches i aint no fag,
Ill make ya leg feel weak like jetlag,
I dodge like dodgeball except im too good,
Fuckers fuck wit me coz im from a london hood,
So da vinci know he gonna callin my name,
Coz wit me (((The council)))) youll have some fame,

Yall know that was a sick drop just pm me to tell me im in and i could be leader coz da vinci is wack ima turn this crew around itll be dope okay my friends peace out 1 love
Oh yeah i forget u can be gentle with ur man but i have a plan ya dont need vaseline to be mean!!!
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Old 09-30-04, 08:07 AM   #10
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^What the fuck^ try again later when you elevate no have but vinci would
kill you with one bar.
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Old 09-30-04, 08:18 AM   #11
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umm excuse me i am really good okay look at this 4 wins okay i would merk that batty da vinci why is ppl scared i have aids ok my life is hard and rap is the only thing thats going for me i mean two things rap and rockin my mans anus that isnt so bad thankyou but seriously i like rockin that anus what u should do is when your man comes home give him a handy then a 'blowdry' and a cumshot it goes every where!any ways peace thanks for the tip in your pm da vinci about pleasin ya man peace
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Old 09-30-04, 03:47 PM   #12
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This crew is dopeness
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Old 09-30-04, 05:16 PM   #13
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^ Okay, his post was whack but don't ignore me because of it
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Old 10-04-04, 02:49 PM   #14
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^ Okay, his post was whack but don't ignore me because of it


You are wack hoe-mo
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Old 09-30-04, 05:48 PM   #15
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i dont fuck w/ non-rhymin poetry so im not gonna judge that

and is maze serious???
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