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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

I will start like the ladies in the breast cancer marathon,
Time to bust a sweat on your ass, like in a triatholon.
aight not a good opener 4/10
Your like an iron you steam away your ideas through stress,
Not again, You let the big girl balloon tittys get to ya head.
dont rhyme here and not good 2/10
But dont worry I aint dead, but ill be there to make sure you locked.
Your like your mother, dontstop my name tatooed on the cock.
wtf....ewww that wack man 0/10
Pictures of me hung to drop, im the one who spoiled your crop,
ok multi but still.....2/10
You make as much sense as a victoria secret magazine cover,
But I dont see nuthing but a thong you and your little brother.
wtf.....0/10
I dont even have a gun yet i still pistol wip your ass,
You can smell the fear when i walk in the room with a beer to pass,
that made no sense at all......lol 0/10
Take a sip and lie on the ground like wood taking your last gasp,
You are shit to me, im done with this faggot, My turn is passed.
ok aight closer.....4/10

Total 12/70 wow u need help man nned to work on this alot man get some help but practive aight man cuz really u need them aight no offense man but seriously look up some great battles and see how they do it aight.....



If "angel" overdosed on "zantex" his "bars" still wouldnt be "ill"
He be looking "close" at my "text" saying that nigga "narc" got "skills"
wack opener......2/10
You gotta an "addiction" to "dick son" so you gonna become "gay" and "dumb"
So do the "addition" your like "richard simmions" combined with "homer simpson"
......lol made me laugh but not that good 4/10

You like the "cafetiria lady" the way you let the "net" get to your "head"
Even if you "broke a pencil" you still wouldnt be "busting lead"
good punch nice wordplay.....6/10

Angel knows im the best "so this guy" should just "admit it"
Cause the only thing on "top of I(eye)" is my "eyebrow" and "my fidit"
nah kinda wack.......2/10

Thoughts is like "larry bird" cause he got "balls" over the "net"
But when i see him in "the streets" he acts "small" and the beef he seems to "forget"
dont use net again.....lol but its aight 4/10
I always "seem" to get in the minds of people when i "instigate beef"
The only thing "mean" about your "rhymes" is the way they "discriminate heat"
ok aight thats aight then 5/10
Homie im known to "be mean" if i ask "for pussy" you'll just show "me your team"
Just gimme the "cream" before "Uzi" sprays your ass like a "tangerine"
alot of self glory......2/10
Someone get tragic a "PACIFIER" so he can "CAN SUCK IN SILENCE"
He dont spit "FIRE" so some one break his fingers so we wont read "HIS WRITINGS"
ok get it....4/10
I'll have you "bugging out" like i spit "you some raid"
You watch as the "light fades" like i pulled down the "the shades"
nice punch but bring more delivery.....5/10
These guys a "bad angel" cause he has trouble getting his "wings"
batteling "narc" then you gonna have trouble "getting some wins"
......nice wordplay here too......and a good personal......but again self glory.....5/10


39/100---ok u had alot of self glory dont do that aight nd u need to bring more delivery o ur punches but an aight verse keep elevatijn aight but u get my
v/ cuz u just had better lines and just a better verse both keep practicin and get better aight 1 v/ narc- uzi........

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