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08-26-04, 09:18 AM
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Fer real man that was some tight shit .. Real deep n had meaning bro..Good shit..
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08-26-04, 09:23 AM
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now that shit was amazing it was a basterd to read cos the words were so small but im gonna have to give this to ya it was amazing in my opinion the storyline itself was hot id definitly say its worth open mic of the month...
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08-26-04, 09:50 AM
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Banned: Biting
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by the way can some one help me with my batles please
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08-26-04, 09:57 AM
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1926
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Vote You Mean???...
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08-26-04, 10:15 AM
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doin ya thang kidd
keep ya gunz up
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08-26-04, 10:30 AM
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Yo that was tight I liked the topic the whole thing was really def
Good rhymes and everything i give u a 9.5/10 |
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08-26-04, 11:20 AM
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Like all's said already, great depth, amazing visualisation. Actually thought you must have some relative experience to have written this... you're fifteen years only, that makes this piece a piece of artwork. Well developed inner vision. The stuff of great writers. Listen to me goin' on like some old Hinglish Teacher n all, LOL, but I'm seriously impressed with this. August: in, no doubt about that. Still haven't figured out how to work this forum so I hope my vote gets counted here. i tried once and it knocked me back.
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08-26-04, 01:33 PM
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1926
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Ayo Thanks For The Love...
Upping... .One. |
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08-26-04, 04:23 PM
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Flowed Perfect..Nice Structure/RhymesScene..Good Vocab!!..That Was One OfThe best Poetry I Ever Seen..
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08-26-04, 04:52 PM
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RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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Fire ass drop, definitely a contender for open mic of the month. vocab was nice, imagery on point, spelling, oh well cant be perfect. keep droppin the hot shit.
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08-26-04, 05:05 PM
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1926
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Ayo Thanks For The Props Everyone...
Upping This... .One. |
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08-26-04, 05:34 PM
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Nice shit thats was crazy yo thats Open Mic of august fe rel no doubt..
this nigga got it nuffa said 1 e.z
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08-26-04, 06:55 PM
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insane drop mayne.OM of August fo sho!!! Keep doin ya thang that shit was sik as fuk.
come check out The Council.
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08-26-04, 08:35 PM
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yo sun i told you before your the best text cee i ever read in my life all your topicals are fucking dope as fuck this was gansta kind like the shit you droped aganist shadow almost that good dope as fuck dog it brought a tear to my eye fo real anyone says this aint open mic of the month your mothers a bitch
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08-27-04, 08:54 AM
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1926
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Lol This Is The Jesus Piece Right Here...
Cuz It Just Turned Empire From One Of My Haters To A Fan... Lololmao... Thanks For The Love Everyone... .One. |
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