hmmm okay. damn no onez votin on my battlez.

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i JUST NEED 1 MORE VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please vote the battle in my sig. the favor WILL b returned

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uppin try outs uppin try outs uppin try outs

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Yo this is the verse i posted fo' my battle against LyricleSolja......Just a quick keystyle....

My Lyrics Descending, Renderin' You Defensless.....
Pressure mountin on ya Cranium-Ya mind gettin Restless.....
Foolin ya Lyrical Devices wit Stealth and Camoflauge.......
Hazardous to Herbs Health-Hittin ya wit Lyrical Volleys n' a Barrage.....
I Collide wit ya Rhymes but mine Dominate...
Create a Body count at a Phenominal Rate.....
LyricleSolja Minds been Fractured and Shattered nuttin left to Obliterate....
Cast this Fool into Eternal Rest This Herbs Just Sealed his own Fate.....
Ya rhymes are timed-bad just like Premature Ejaculation......
The onli time ya get "Hot" is from the friction on ya hand of u Masterbatin.....

dman that's fuck up dude

Scrape out^.......

heres one from me I.Mind i'm doin good right?


you suck you fuckin dog and i'll throw you in a pitt/
bring you down and spit in ur face and say you aint shit/
you cant battle for shit cuz bitch you aint fitt/
you wont spit because you too afraid to get hit/
you aint got no ballz to battle me you shook/
you kno you suck so why you call out Snook /
come against me fo sho bitch you'll get cooked/
when you yell your so unknown no one will look/
your another loser in my hand book/
dawg get outta here kick in the ass with my foot/
you aint shit but a mutha fuckin pussy/
you still suck and you still a duck suckin rookie/
your skillz will never fuckin grow/
i'll give you aa lost bitch you kno/
llok i drooped you didnt bitch i'm done with this hoe/

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lol. mines BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i been practicing multi's 4 a new song im writing... here's a sneak:

"cause of my criminal thoughts, many young lives r wrought/
a few hits of marijuana and another kid ends up shot/
an innocent life lost, government looks at us cross/
blaimin it on the music and we pay the cost"

AND

"they say all my music is just disrespectin/
and yet im creating millions of hits per second/
they disapprove my opinion cause im an adolecent/
but if u listen closly, i really teach a lesson"

AND FINALLY

"dont go minglin in2 places when no1 wants u/
or else all our industry gon burn like hot glue/
im aimin this all at the Bush administration/
media's interrigation/
this whole fucking generation"
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the last was kinda weak, but tell me wut u think. its political, so..

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i think ur rhymes are too simple.
try to make summin better than this. this is tupacz rhyme and try to rhyme like this.
I was born a rebel
makin trouble for the devil
takin this gang bangin ish
to a whole nother level.

damn he is so ill.

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"you suck you fuckin dog and i'll throw you in a pitt/"

I'M basic?

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i can make a rhyme like that.

my head steamz like a kettle
to where i can never settle
i hit the fastest
with a fist as hard as metal.

how do you like it.

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yo mercenary, your the potential co-leader ight??jst start gettin wins lol

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aight man i will but no one votes. coo i'm the co-leader.

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u think his shit better than my verse (other page)?!?!?

i aint jealous or nuttin, just curious how u figured THAT 1???

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