Dudes mad cause his rhymes Flu below tha radar? lol..

It's true, Stanza you ain't great. You didn't beat Sonny. Come back and read the verses in a couple of weeks when you can properly reflect on your own verse, then you'll see it.

And Lampejo's right, in text the primary goal is to diss the opponent. In audio it's obviously not. But in text dissing is everything, and it has to be done creatively. "Fuck you you're whack" is a terrible bar, where as "Fuck you, you're whack like being punched in the face" is still not great, but it's better cos there's an element of creativity to it.

Just keep writing and take the advice people are giving you. Read other battles and see what works. Read the battles in the Hall of Fame. That'll give you an idea of what's liked in text battling.

text battles...which i do...are way weak...more dick rider's...alot more bitten bars...just in general..its REALLY flawed on whos more talented....

I Own In Text Bitches

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