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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
Technical | 3 | 37.50% | |
SPuL | 5 | 62.50% | |
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll |
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02-16-05, 01:49 AM | #31 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
Voted For: Technical
Spul: ight yo man you did good on the minnor things like flow and stucture that was all tight....you did have good punchlines but like what the hell si the shit about ghost writing i know people say you got peopel writing for you but that line was dumb the closer was good but i jsut thought you didnt try hard ive seen way better then this..no hate Technical: ight yo you had the good punches but yo your flow was a lil bit off but i could just grab it by reading it more and the stucture was good tell towards the end, the end was horrible for stucture but i see how you had dope punches and vocab the line with hotshh that was ight but i like your opener alot..pz Opener: Technical Closer: Spul punchlines: Technical vocab: Technical stucture: spul flow: spul creativty: technical Vote: Technical |
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02-17-05, 11:37 AM | #32 | ||||
The Rulers Back
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IP: 03C2 3387
Voted For: SPuL
my vote is SPuL. Tech, your verse was real hard to real. I mean seriously shorten yo lines man. No hate, but work on that. That shit fucked up yo structure soo badly. But the lines I caught were aiight. But try hittin' him wit harder personals and hard punches. Shit works nice. But what you did was aiight though. Not bad verse, but stretched lines fucked up yo flow and structure. But it was aiight try. Come harder next time. SPuL, damn, it's like you did this shit quick cuz this ain't your usual shit man. But it was still nice. Vocab was basic as fuck. But yo punches you had some nice ones. That closer was ill linking back to this battle sayin' it was gonna be his loss. I liked that shit. And the opener gettin' on about the ghosting. Shit was tight wit the punches. You easily got that. Only thing you didn't beat him in was the vocabv. Honestly I think SPuL killed this guy. I'd be amazed if he got even one vote, no hate, it just looks like a KO to me. but both keep elevating. Vote=SPuL |
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02-17-05, 01:24 PM | #33 | |||
Banned
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IP: A1EC 8B20
Voted For: Technical
I Guess His DickRyding On Strobe'll Never End, Once Again Homeboi Sufferin From Line Negligence "Boy"Listen Man, "SP"Only "Advances" To First When Commencing About "Game" References Ranked 1st In The Tourney Huh?...Dukes Was Prolly Lovin It...Felt No One Could Uncomfort Him But How Could Dat Occur...Especially When He Can't Win A Battle When "Hotshh" Is Put On Him* Listen Dude...I Been Checkin Ur Baby Pics....Leaves Me To Ask Who Could Birth This Foo?...* "Junior" You On Virtue Dick Often...He Prolly Nutted More Times That Your Ghostwriter Wrote Fo You (ouch) Me Get Murdered In TECHS(text)?..Dude Was Quick To Move To "Audio" When "Hotshhh" Ripped Ya..He's Ur Daddy Dis Bitch Feels Sorry For Da "Troop"s So He Hopped On The "Jock" Of Superior Methods And Asked If Troop Was Happy(fag) I Rest My Case! good drop, hard hits a few good punches, decent personals good flow and creativeness was preety good nice drop.... 8.0 Askin' me about "Ghosting", fuck, I write my own lines Man, you'd only win if I wrote your verse... and you wrote mine My rhymes all break yo spine, man, you really got no chance it's as 'bout as good as someone wit no legs tryin' to dance Lets get right down to facts, if you wanna get all "technical" you throwin akward punches like the Pistons-Pacers specticale When these fools step to me, it ain't gon turn out well Cuz S, P, u, oh yea, bitch, here's yo L <<< PEEEP LINK!!!!! this verse was lackin everything... no good punches, a few played concepts, flow was aight, no real personals that stood out noting really good at all im dissapointed i thought u was better then that... this def aint no vet verse word... vote TECHNICAL |
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02-17-05, 03:45 PM | #34 | ||||
Throwback Member
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IP: 1964 2957
Voted For: SPuL
That Game Boy line in the other guys was kinda corny and wasn't as effective witht the words out of order. His stuff was ok but alot of filller, filler, punchiline, and the last two lines throw the whole thing out of synch. Spul came ok as well, but he had less filler in his set ups, and lmao at him linkin to this battle, that was nice haven't seen that in a while. Spul had the edge cuz he stayed steady and didn't ramble |
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