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Old 10-05-04, 06:03 PM   #1
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The weak arm ripping through the blue weak open waters
Weddling the sword that ripped through Nations Borders
Standing in the background is a bloody forgotten President
Still wondering why the enemie took out his country to dat extent
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Old 10-06-04, 01:44 PM   #2
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in the deep ocean blue/
horric striptures my mind running thru/
teerible times awakened with out any sleep/
though this time we used swords not heat/
but i rise above any outcome, im a surviver/
without my i horse i caint outrun, i lose to my rival/
burin senations runnin thru my veins like ether/
well we finaly proven that i caint beat ya/

im at school yall not enough time 4 real to right something good
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Old 10-07-04, 03:11 PM   #3
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my first time gettin into this

imma get you back thats why im prowlin
you thought i was drowinin but i gonna get my stallion
drinkin water by the gallons with my lips stammerin
that my sword will hit you with more force than shaolin
the trees makes my voice echo when im shoutin
you think the mist is hidin you well im doubtin
as you prancin im pouncin strait off the mountain
impale you with like a fountain until the water starts ripplin from your shoutin
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Old 10-07-04, 10:40 PM   #4
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Old 10-08-04, 05:48 PM   #5
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Comin out of a battle but survived wit simply one sword,
To let all men die, Id have to call his leader a dumb lord,
He's dyin, he's drownin, all dis stuff sound so herioic,
But in real life he'd be dead, and dam he shud no it,
Maybe theres a savior, sum fool comin in on a horse,
Its too late, cuz he simply wud give up to the rivers force,
I feel sorry for any1 who wud have to and die like dat,
He's weak and fo sum reason simply cant fight back.
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