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Old 11-19-04, 05:43 PM   #1
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Dope shit...feelin the topic...this was no doubt a solid drop dawg...really feelin the chorus...nice shit...keep it up...1
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Old 11-19-04, 05:50 PM   #2
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man, this is what council is all about.
you came with so much heart in this drop, not to metion the flow and rhyme scheme is on point.matter a fact Im a read thru it another time after I post this.
good drop fam. keep that shit coming
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Old 11-19-04, 07:25 PM   #3
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8.4/10....seen better from you but this had a good thing to it...
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Old 11-20-04, 04:28 PM   #4
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thanks for the feedback guys... upping for more.
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Old 11-20-04, 10:58 PM   #5
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wow this is starting to get slept on... lol...

Uppin' for feedback.
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 11-20-04, 11:06 PM   #6
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word was feelin this fam.. its different. but what u were sayin was word... wasent ur average structure or anything. had ya own style to it..w as feelin that.. good shit.. nice job on that shit.. open mic of the month ... (after the ai take over ).. jk lol.. but keep it up.. -1
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Old 11-20-04, 11:11 PM   #7
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word word... thanks for the feedback Calamity...
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Old 11-20-04, 11:39 PM   #8
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damn i aint wanna read this at first but man this was dope, does some one smell an award for real though i give it 9/10 homie do your thang
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Old 11-20-04, 11:54 PM   #9
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Mayn This Was Tight Yo Flow Was Banging,I Saw Hell Of Multi's In There OverAll Ya Flow Stook To The Subject All What The Title Says,I Give This a 10/10 Good Vocabulary Mayn
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Old 11-20-04, 11:59 PM   #10
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thanks man
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uppin' for more feedback.
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Old 11-21-04, 08:06 AM   #11
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was feelin it good drop vp ....ps you ever bringin psa back?
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Old 11-21-04, 08:15 PM   #12
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Maybe someday... Not for a while... I'm in the council...
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Old 11-22-04, 01:20 PM   #13
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wow... stop sleepin' on this...
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Old 11-22-04, 07:00 PM   #14
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Wow, that shit was real dope. Incredible flow, great usage of vocab...
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This is really the only thing I need to post here...
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Old 11-22-04, 07:11 PM   #15
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dope drop not really much about graduating in it but 2 lines..but hot usage of multi's and good flow..i aint finish someone else's open mic in a while....
the chorus is more like a verse though..i would make it shorter..
like the humor........a bit emineminish for me but...i never read ya shit im impressed..........8.5/10
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