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Personify 2 28.57%
•Para¶el• 5 71.43%
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Old 01-29-05, 01:35 PM   #31
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Old 01-29-05, 02:37 PM   #32
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Voted For: Personify

i say personify took this one.. more emotion... i like the structure.. it flows decent.... had good imagery.. just i think u overused some vocab.. and parralel u force rhymes way too much.. u really need to work on that.. and ur flow.. topical pieces should flow too.. soo good job to both im just feeling personify's more due to the good imagery and the good emotion.. but try to fix that vocab stuff.. and parralel watch out for forced rhymes...
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Old 01-30-05, 12:43 PM   #33
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Old 01-30-05, 02:51 PM   #34
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Voted For: •Para¶el•

Alright this was a very close battle but ima have to go with Þaяallεl ...... let me break it down

Þaяallεl - I liked your verse better, your verse just fit the topic alot better and i it all flowed.. Also your vocab was nice. And it felt like a message was being said cause i was feeling your drop alot more than Golden Days......ya feel me..

Golden Days - I Wasnt feeling yours as much it didnt fit the topic close to as well as Þaяallεl's.. Also your vocab wasnt as good and i didnt like the structure the font was too small for a topical verse... not hating eigther and im not just voting him because your verse had a small font.. also your flow had lost me in some points but this was a close battle...

nice battle...very close..

Vote= Þaяallεl
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