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hotshh! 4 44.44%
Mimesis 5 55.56%
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Old 08-29-04, 02:20 PM   #31
Typical
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alright...first off wat is it wit all tha fuckin explaining...damn
actin like a couple of bitchs...but heres da break down...

mimesis...these first two bars had good punches n ok flow...
Im leave ya blown and screwed...ur just alone dude...as i lyrically stone you
And the dumbass gets rejected so much...
...he still labels himself as his own crew!*
U just thrown and bruised...your handin me the W...so i take ur gift in a cup
And good for hot for tryin to raise the bar...
...to bad he broke his back liftin it up!**
mimesis...but these last three bars lost it for u...i could tell u thought they were good but i wasnt feelin them...tha third bar was acceptable but not hot...tha forth bar was whack n so was tha closer...u shoulda kept it up...

hotshh!...ur first two bars werent hard punches, but tha flow n multis were of tha hook...but the end is wat got me...
You nonvenomous snake,kicked out ya clique,2 feminine
Only cause Eminem was taken,u named ya self Memisis
Ur sig insults wiggas,u couldnt make da cut wit scissors
Mim disapear like magicians witches warlocks an wizards<whoa...this last line was kill...
opinion...
in the end mimesis lost cuz he didnt go da stretch, which sucked cuz he coulda won wit jus punches...hotshh! had a way betta flow multis n creativity...since this was close
im gonna break it down some more
vocab::u were both good
punches::mimesis
flow::hotshh!
structure::hotshh!
personels::mimesis
creativity::hotshh!
content::hotshh!
i broke dis down! so who eva disagrees can suck it
FUCK HOTSHH!...FUCK MIMESIS...IM OUT!
PEACE...
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Old 08-29-04, 02:33 PM   #32
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CORRECTION!
"Mim disapear like magicians witches warlocks an wizards<WHOA...LAST LINE WAS HOT...
opinion..."
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Old 08-29-04, 02:34 PM   #33
Typical
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Jus Forget It...
Ignore Dat Last Post Im Retarded.
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Old 08-29-04, 03:11 PM   #34
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Naw, Hotshh took this cuz, all of that explaining that mimesis did before his drop, i wasn't feeling at all.. give a rebuttle with your verse, not an explaination or facts.. that's like feeding, or swaying votes.. But not really, i'm not accusing you of that, don't get me wrong.. but let me break this down for quality..

Structure -
It is so obvious that hotshh took that, his lines were almost even and not stretched, mim's was, and was less attractive looking..

Wordplay -
Hotshh gets this also, I like his opener, he came straight at mim with multies and nice flow.. mim's was kinda basic..

Flow -
Hotshh, some of the multies and vocab made hotshh' flow sound better and jus stand out more as a tight verse..

Punches - Tie, I wasn't feeling either of your punches really, this verse you both were lacking on that..

Personals -
Hotshh won this basically with his closer which i kinda touched up on in the beginning.. how mim had a chance to read what he went up against and rebuttled before he even spit, i wasn't feeling that, and when hotshh said it in his verse, that added insult to injury, i actually laughed at that line, it was basic, but a true and nice personal..

overall - Hotshh, personals hit, structure was more pleasant, flow was more on point, you had an overall better verse, holla.
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Old 08-29-04, 04:04 PM   #35
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^ Thats a fuckin hate vote..

Dont be mad cause i voted against you in ur battle with Calamity..

Faggot.
 
Old 08-29-04, 04:13 PM   #36
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lol^^
well this was really a one sided battle lol

Mimesis
damn son you had a hot verse... , nice personals ... good flow.. your strcuture was alittle off at times... and you had some hot hard hitten punchlines,..overall you had a hot verse but ive seen alot better from you but it was enough to merk this "Hot" shyt

Hot shyt
wow you certainly surprised me in this verse , you had some nice punchlines but not all of em were hitten hard like Mimesis, Personals were pretty good, but ive seena lot better, structure was as well off but you had some nice lines,but overall i gotta give this one to mimesis he came harder..
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