Del: Nice flow. Structure was kinda fucked up but flow was tight. No personals really but had some good disses. Meta's were hittin in dat verse. U had a good battle verse without da personals and that Elton John line had me buggin. Dat shit was funny

Script: Flow was nice. Most punches were on point but u had no personals. I didnt like ur opener though. Seems as if u got big word happy or sumthin. U was killin da ending of -tals. But i seen what u was tryin to do and i liked how u was thinkn. But sometimes they flow can still be nice and be simple. In this case i think u put to much on it. It still would of been nice if u would of calmed down a bit. But otha than shit all ur shit was straight.

Nice battle from da both of way. This one was real close both, of u keep at it and keep ur heads up. Whoeva looses this battle should of nuffin taken away from there game cuzz both of ya came game tight on this one.

Vote: Del.

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yo uppin foe some votes. dont forget you gotta poll on diss 1 cos its tyme old. peace.

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alright battle
scrip wins dis 1 close tho
better punches n per met etc.. he won dis 1
plz return da fav on a battle in my sig

im prolific, you'll be needing your share of anticeptics, my power is mistic~
~shows how stupid ya ass is cause all your raps are pre-scriptive*~
^^^^^^^^ Aight nice opener good punches

~ima end this right here, dont debate i leave you facing your fate~
~discrasing-ya-face, faggot makes elton john look straight~
~gott ya in a bag, ima fuckin boss-on-the-track~
~i dont even need to drop-a-mack, by the looks of all the losses-you-have**~
^^^^^^^^ Aight nice personals and punches good dayum (fiya)

i dont joke or kid, get rid of you cause im from the cali-bay~
~rallies-may, insue when you like MOP yelling out Fire, gettin whipped in a alley-way~
~stop the bite-fightin, im right-to-smite-you-and~
~you couldnt beat me if i was hollyfeild, and you was mike-tyson~
^^^^^^^^^^^^ Good closa w/ da personals and a punch

What you’re lacking is…:the flow fundamentals and the content credentials…
Detrimental blows potential to leave you with shattered dentals…I consent essentials…
^^^^^^^^^ Aight nice multi'z and punches (hot)

I’m pissed off…so I’ll begin by sawing your knees off instead…
Plus I’m ‘coming off the top’ like ‘rubbing fleas off your head’…
I strike boards with swords then strangle you with my mic-chord…
I’ll pause while the shots go down like the moment when Mike-scored…(MJ vs Utah)
^^^^^^^^^^ Aight mayne nice punches good wordplay'z

I school kids…and we aint got to step on the ball court for me to do this…
I’ll leave you clueless…the battle resembles my dick the way you blew this…
Screw this…I’m dismissing…leaving kids missing and dissing with each script…
Steady and ready to hit with sickest spit I deliver shots when fully equipped…
^^^^^^^^^^^^ Whoa nice mayne good closa fo sho dis an hot battle lol


Yo dis an hot battle,,,,,,, but i have to go with da D becuz he had personals and punches and good flow

yo mayne scriptive u had good punches and flow but it didnt hit harder,,,,,,,, u say u elevate tru tru homie...

but i have to give dis vote to Deliquint becuz of harder punches and personals

~peace~

Yeah yeah man I gotta go with De, ayo this battle was raw, I aint read an hot battle like this one since I was an newb. But punches and metas, and creativity was all nice on both sides but over all D had a harder verse, nice post both of yall.
If yall aint got a crew then try out for Original Sound, need hot kats like yall.

v/D. Return the honest vote plz, both of yall.