Telekinetic
Nothin special..
Very mediocre..
But yeah u atleast packed some punches..
Work on ur overall complexity..wordplay etc..
Not to bad..some common shit..slightly played.
..Not to bad though.. at least u showed effort..
..& aimed at ur opponent..some ok lines..
Overall just try to elevate battle alot..
Overall..Ok.

Dough
You obviously had the better vocab..
But ur verse looked like a diss piece in general..
Not one personalized punch or w/e..
Also alot of played concepts..for example the reeves line..
It was all pretty simple..not bad but its been done before..
The nelly line..*sigh* ur bout no.203 usin it.
Anyways not to bad..
But still Overall Ok

vote:Telekinetic[/B]
Cause of more creative & somewhat actual punches.

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yeh tele gets this for going at his opponent. Hes verse was nothing special but had some oright punches. Dough just came not strong enough, you have to attack you opponent. You just didnt do it enough. So i vote for tele

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if i could vote i'd have to go with tele, his punches were aih=ght and stix it looks as though u rushed thru ur verse, i'm still a few votes away, but keep at it guys there is potential

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shit was all good just a week ago!!

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Sombodys got to end this shit its been up for like a week.......
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aiht tele wins this because he had better pucnhes and flow

better punches win battles and tele had them

it was a close battle but tele won the most important category as well as most of the other category's

my vote-telekinetic

hit up the battle in the sig and the battle between me and bugz bunny on the first page of front lines

RETURN THE FAVOR...its madd slept on