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ice got this he had better structure made his easier to read ..he had good punches...and his flow was nice....till u was ight but ur structure made u kinda hard to read w/o losin ya place but you had some decent punches and flow but his punches hit harder thats why he get mey vote..good battle ya'lll

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Till and Iceman how many times.............have you and Iceman did these vs. battles? Wel Till came down over all blow for blow with punches and his metaphors were hot enough to melt da Iceman..........it seemed to me.Till had some wordplay in his structure and flow dat Iceman was somewhat you could say lacking. Iceman had some tight punches that I thought won da battle win I first read it.......but when I read Till's it was a different story. Com'n ice I saw you do better than dis merking niggas....what happened..like you ain't flowed in a while. Ice was really starting out with basic rhymes and then used complex rhymes dat all was gravy....Ice's structure could of been better because I rather read it all together. Ice's punches and metaphors about TillEyeDie were not direct therefore TillEyeDie gets my vote and not Iceman because hiswere directed.

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Oh..............my bad i've already voted so I didn't poll it my bad.......well check my other shit, thanks
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I'ma go wit IceMan on dis one. He had a structure which is somethin till really needs to work on. try to put more in ya stanzas though fa real. but i gotta say you had some nice punches. some of them i found to be quite amusing...

Till u just too elementary. your personals at da beginnin were aight, but they seemed forced and too basic. so thats one thing you need to work on. anotha is ya overall punches. don't just say shit to say it. make sure it makes some typa sense that the reada can follow, and make sure it still pertains to what you talkin bout...wit a lil elevation you be straight do'.

vote-iceman

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even though iceman voted for set-ignorance over me, i have to go with iceman on this one, his verse seemed to flow alot better, and his rhymes worked well, his punches were also very hard hittin, with tilleyi's punches, while still there, not as hard hitting.

v/iceman

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