sry but need 2 more votes to win

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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

eeuhhm............................................ ......

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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

thiz battle waz weak
daffer22 had some weak punchez but at least he had flow 'n rhymez in hiz verse... rappin' master, maybe u should try and make some words rhyme...
I couldn't find a flow in that bunch of wordz...
Daffer22 getz thiz, even though it waz still wack...
daffer22, still work on vocabulary though...
rappin' master, get another hobby...

vote - daffer22

thx bro, I work on it...... 3-0 for me

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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

need 2 more votes (again)

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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

Yo I spit ill, so challengin' me is gonna get you killed
But still, it's hard for you to chill
Cuz my homies r out there to make u thrill
pretty weak, multis are useless unless you have a creative punch/personal/meta in there too
I'm gonna burry you alive, so you betta decide
where you gonna hide cuz I'm not gonna be kind
I bet you doing just fine, layin your ass down wit your face under sunshine
ehh ok
But then suddenly an explosion, you flying round in the air
You've been hit wit a sensation but does anybody care?
Your bitch cryin with her hands in her hair, sayin it isn't fair
But i'm just wondering what does she wear?
whack
This is just borin battlin against Rappin' Masta
Bet he sounds like real disasta
Haven't got the skills to write fasta
weak
You're bout to be hit with bullets comin from my baretta
Or be prepared to be stabbed by my stiletta
played
I really think this masta shud blow a dick
He's gay after all, cuz he raps like shit
Don't have to think about givin me a lick
Cuz i blow you away, just gives me a kick
[b]played


The world has had enough of Daffer22 finking dat hes the next eminem, hes soundng like a 12 year old girl on heluim,
weak, this aint audio, dun throe fake punches, you can't hear what he sounds like
u try and hit on girls by putting them on a cd,
just coz they all reject you, but not me,
callin yaself gay? Whack line
Ur acne and ur unwanted facial hair,
makes u a relation to frankesteins creation,
blah
so dis guy is in the D.E.D crew instead,
by the time iv finished with you, his crew will definetly be dead,
weak
Just like a curtain, u need sum1 to pull yourself together,
afta iv ended my verse, ull be scarred forever,
This guys an expensive chocolate, hes from belguim,
but just like the chocolates, he aint yum,
ur new to da business, u got a lot to learn,
im closin in on a victory, which way r u gonna turn?
weak whack crack attack

Daffer takes this battle. Both should check out the whackness emergency center for useful battle tips. Daffer, you had a few ok lines. Stay away from all gay/fag/homo etc lines cause they are mad played and worthless in battles nowadays. Rappin try and be more creative in your rhymes. Also try and even out your flow. Vote-Daffer

Pleasee return the favor and drop an honest vote here. I took the time for you guys. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337 Thanks

1 more vote plz

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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

1 more vote needed

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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

Yo I spit ill, so challengin' me is gonna get you killed
But still, it's hard for you to chill
not feeling this opener... it isnt much of punch, and doesnt have that good of a libary
Cuz my homies r out there to make u thrill
I'm gonna burry you alive, so you betta decide
more like a filler.. doesnt really hit with a punch.
where you gonna hide cuz I'm not gonna be kind
I bet you doing just fine, layin your ass down wit your face under sunshine
... see above bars... You really need to focus on punchlines more
But then suddenly an explosion, you flying round in the air
You've been hit wit a sensation but does anybody care?
no, this comes off as FILLER, off subject and not a punch, with no real metaphor/b]
Your bitch cryin with her hands in her hair, sayin it isn't fair
But i'm just wondering what does she wear?
.......[b/]
This is just borin battlin against Rappin' Masta
Bet he sounds like real disasta
weak punch on the follow through
Haven't got the skills to write fasta
You're bout to be hit with bullets comin from my baretta
self boasting and filler shit
Or be prepared to be stabbed by my stiletta
I really think this masta shud blow a dick
weak attemp at a personal
He's gay after all, cuz he raps like shit
Don't have to think about givin me a lick
weak punch... no metaphor your lacking alot of strength
Cuz i blow you away, just gives me a kick
This battle is over, dude your verse is gonna have to be sick
ending is weak.. but its alright.. not much in the way of punching.

You really lacked on your punchs, you need to focus on your direction then work on personals and build up your strength.. After that your going to have to work on your metaphors, then build a rhyme scheme.




The world has had enough of Daffer22 finking dat hes the next eminem, hes soundng like a 12 year old girl on heluim,
weak opening, weak punch, metaphor could have been better
u try and hit on girls by putting them on a cd,
just coz they all reject you, but not me,
sort of works against you.. weak bar i thought
Ur acne and ur unwanted facial hair,
makes u a relation to frankesteins creation,
basic diss.. sort of weak but i like the concept
so dis guy is in the D.E.D crew instead,
by the time iv finished with you, his crew will definetly be dead,
aiight personal.. punch needed a little more strength though
Just like a curtain, u need sum1 to pull yourself together,
afta iv ended my verse, ull be scarred forever,
set was nice.. good metaphor punch was eh... Follow through was filler type ish
This guys an expensive chocolate, hes from belguim,
but just like the chocolates, he aint yum,
i dunno dog.. i like chocolate.. i mean dont you? lol this punch was an alright attemp
ur new to da business, u got a lot to learn,
im closin in on a victory, which way r u gonna turn?
alright follow through.. Not much of an ending, the metaphor was decent

over all your punchs were there and they werent, you needed more direction in your verse i thought. I liked a few of your concept and i thought you needed a little bit bettter rhyme scheme.. metaphors were decent..

vote- Rappin' Master
I thought he just had better punchs and came off with alot better metaphors.. FLow was on there a little more.

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LoL re tract^^^^ sorry Rappin but i re read them, and never listen to the radio while your slepy and voting.. Lmao, Daffer I retract that vote

Vote- Daffer

Sorry man i really skipped over alot of what you had to say

OnE

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Ok........So that vote goes out to me than?

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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

1 more vote.............................................. ...

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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

no you won already, but get a mod tocheck this battle and have them see my post n they should credit you the win.

Yes you get the vote, i vote on the poll wrong

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Aight.................

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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)