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baller_84106 |
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1 | 16.67% |
SPuL |
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5 | 83.33% |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
aiight, uppin'
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 19AD 4244
yo i'ma finally drop my shit, sorry I delayed ya loss/
now i'm comin, gonna crucifix ya, and leave ya on da cross/ Started out good but then it fell off now u lookin like a controversial movie about christ's passion/ but u and ya raps are whack and outta fashion/ Ehh.... baller comin wit rhymes to make ya bedroom shake/ harder than earthquakes/ only way ya gonna beat me is if the votes are errors or mistakes/ ???? Didn't really make too much sense. still aint gonna beat me, even if ya was da ref/ got retards, blind peeps, and people that are def/ to say i'm still da best/ That was a punch against yourself spul, u a bitch, ya never gonna beat me/ i'ma spit disses to turn ya 360 degree/ Once again, not really a punch spin ya and slap ya, whatchya gonna come wit spul?/ nuttin is da answer, cuz i got my nines and triggers pulled/ Weak....... got 9 lyrical bullets flyin in ya heads direction/ ya gonna be beat hard and left in manic depression/ Blah, blah, blah...... ya just a rappin freshman in this rappin school/ my rhymes are hotta than fire ignitin airplane fuel/ When will this end? look at me, i got spul in check ready to retaliate/ calm down dog, ya shoulda know this was predetermined fate/ Weak closer You like hard, long rods… shoved up your big tushy I’ll stick one right in yo mouth… and call you a big pussy Not bad, could have been worded better I’ll make you so stiff… jus like a toy soldier Cuz I be the devil… sittin’ on yo left shoulder You forgot the punch I’m always “In Da Club”, so they all call me fitty I’ll have more salt in yo mouth, than there is in yo city Weak attempt at a personal, but it was an attempt Your punches are so shitty… you don’t kno when to hit Jus like George Bush… you’re all fart and no shit I just didn't get it SPuL is here to kick yo ass… and make you so soft If I were you… I’d tell your f**kin’ man, to back off Ehh..... Why’d you take so long? Why’d you hqve to stall? The number after “baller”, is how many times I’ll make fall Finally a personal that hits a little! Baller: You didn't have anything that stood out. A bunch of empty punches and weak wordplay (if there was any) isn't gonna get you a win. This is a battle so you gotta throw a few blows....... Spul: You didn't really come that hard either but you had better flow and personals. Keep it up and strive to get better. Vote: Spul
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: C1DA C961
aiight, thanks for votin'. Uppin' for votes.3-1, me.
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: C1DA C961
still uppin'
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IP: C1DA C961
uppin'
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Youngin jus call me Young
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IP: 4948 3CF8
Vote SPul
Opener- tha baller dude gits it...i liked tha christ thingy that wuz crunk Closer-Sebastian gits it..LMAO-I CALLED YOU OUTTTT.....it wuz crunk play on his name VOcab-both cud use betta vocab and meta4s too now to tha deciding factor-PUNCHES-spul killed em wit them punches...but baller wuz hittin hard too...ya''ll are mean to each other :-/ wordplay..spul gits it for that thing wit tha numbers in ya name..that wuz krunk word play to meeeee MY VOTE IS TO SPUL..FOR PUNCHES AND CLOSER http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118208 vote |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: C1DA C961
haha, thanks for votin'. Aiight 4-1, me. Let's wrap this thing up. Uppin' for votes, I'll return the favor, jus drop a link. And Young, I'll go vote on that now.
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: C1DA C961
uppin'
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: 7C40 358D
aight close shit
Baller...although yoru verse came wit more punches they werent strong this is because your rhymes were played like whoa not to shabby though, you need to elavate... Spul..more amusing than harmful your verse was it flowed well and your structre helped though your verse was shorter than ballers the few lines you had came much harder compared to ballers overall you killed him with ease Vote spul |
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Flyweight
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IP: CE79 7DB8
Baller the first thing I noticed about your rhyme was that you had entertainment longevity, average complexity, cool structure. Spul, you came with low complexity, not much of a entertainment factor, pleasable punches and above average structure. final judgment is this - Spul, your rhymes didn't contain much liveliness, in the process of constructing your rhymes this factor ill presented in your structure, watering down your complexity... and for Baller, I enjoyed ballers expression especially in his fourth bar though it was fucked up, you presented good complexity and you systematically added that entertainment in and thats really attracted me.
vote:baller_84106
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