still uppin for more votes here, fa sho..............

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BLACK..

I "sleep" on weak niggas like u...keep on reppin "Naptown"
this was an OK personal i guess

u wanna be larger than life...I can send u to see Jesus
this was ok

Nigga couldnt throw punches even if he boxed his own shallow

nah,u didnt word this properly..if u had said..nigga's punches aint hittin,like boxing ur own shadow..it would've been a much better punch

o I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow

sorry dude,but that content is PLAYED as fuck

douce

My 6 wins in a row is "longer" than the Black's "package"
this could've been ok,but it wasnt worded properly...

I mesmerize your mind and leave you nothing but a question mark to write.

this was ok,but it sounds a little too poetic for a battle


i have to give this to black...he had better flow n punches..

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Duece had that battle definitly. All around better flow, better opener and better cracks at Black Quief, i mean Thief.

g won perfectly with his shit it was off da hook
man
with yo line that said
i mesmerise yo mind and leave yo nothing but a question mark to write

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Ok,

Black Thief And G: Deuce both did they thang. This shit was almost too close to call.

Basically even in flow, creativity, personals.

I think the punches from Deuce hit a lil' betta. Loved this line right here(same shit as everyone else)

Speaking of plans, you just got denied of your pen and mic
I mesmerize your mind and leave you nothing but a question mark to write.

But Gotta give the close shit to Deuce, because Ima just go wit the line that made me say "OH FUCK"! in a tight battle like this. But Thief, you definately held yo shit down my nigga. Both of y'all stay on yo grind.

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uppin for more votes.......................uppin fa sho

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still uppin for this last vote.....................someone please vote

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uppin come on....vote please

Nigga couldnt throw punches even if he boxed his own shallow
Im deep and you shallow....I know its hard to follow
so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow
HAHAHA I LOVE THAT...THATS THE WAY TO END A BATTLE...ight...theif...ur punches was hard and very personal..flow and structure was ight...no multies really..ur vacab u can use some work...

G-Duece-wasnt really feeling it..i know u can bring it harder than that...ur punches and vocab was ok..but thief won cause his ending was just sick...thats the way u need to end ur battles...ur flow was good tho...keep elevating

vote on this

quickpunch vs insidious

im a noob im here 4 some battles cuz i wanna make it 2 tha top and aint none of yall bitches goin stop me.

uppin for some votes in here.........................uppin

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uppin for some votes....................uppin for some

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still uppin for some votes.......................please

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aight....
Black - u had sum nice punches....hot closer....werk on uin sum multis and uppin ur vocab.....try to up ur personals a bit too......good flow....nice spit....
Overall - 7/10
G - u had a lot of nice punches....hard hitting and great wordplay.....nice vocab in this....u simply got this based on punches.....cuz everything else was really close.....good effort by both but G gets this for better punches....
Overall - 7.8/10
Keep droppin yall....ive seen better by both but punches took this one....holla....

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

ight.........................uppin for one more vote........this going to be close....let the best mc win

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