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MARVOLoUsJ1009 1 16.67%
DeadlyVision 5 83.33%
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Old 04-28-04, 06:35 PM   #1
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lol^^^^wow everybody dat voted 4 dis nigga is his friend lmaooooo



DO they have anythang to do wit this battle and how am merkin ya. hahaha i guess not.
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Old 04-28-04, 06:38 PM   #2
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LMAOOO umm dogg half ya fukkin words barley ryhme whut r u talkin about everybody dat voted 4 u is ya dogg...u wanna audio battle
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Old 04-28-04, 07:00 PM   #3
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Kid accept this loss. Stop Whining. U even went to Strobe for help...hahaha


And audio battle. We shall do. Ama get a new mic. So be Patient. Than u would say "His friends voted for em in audio 2"..lol I wouldnt be suprised.
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Old 04-28-04, 07:03 PM   #4
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ummmm aint no way u fittin dem long ass lines on no beat plus ur creative level is 0 4real i hope u dont battle off da net like dat
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Old 04-28-04, 07:10 PM   #5
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1st of all do u even do audio.

2nd Creativeness? A battle will be judged on your punches and personals. Mostly. i guess u dont even kno what is a battle.
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Old 04-28-04, 07:42 PM   #6
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I'ma give this one to Deadlyvision cause Marv your punches were hard to decypher.
The bottom line is punches and I'm sure if I could understand them they might not be half bad, but man I shouldn't have to study to understand ya verse kid.

Deadlyvision, if you hadn't of switched the style up, I probably would have given it to him, cause that first bit wasn't really work'n for ya. I'd say the same thingy, ya punches was hard to decypher, but stick with that new style cause ya defintly rip shit up with it.

Vote on this shit;
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120963
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Old 04-28-04, 08:04 PM   #7
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Uno vote is Over. This Herbecide got merked.
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Old 04-28-04, 08:24 PM   #8
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u da type da back down & freeze,keep talkin da black pound a squeeze-
u not tuff u a "happy" nigga datz scared of "beef" like da "mad cow disease"-
not crazy original, but decent
all u do is hate on my shyne,but wait till da dem strays start brakin ya spine-
dunn battlin u is like "puttin a watch on my hip" all u doin is "wastin my time"-
but da 8 or 9, a put ya "brain in da air" so u could "make up ya mind"-
not a fan of 3 line bars, i tried it once and it didnt work. i like the wasting time wordplay, but its kinda wasted in between two useless lines.
u'z a lil bitch nigga u really aint worth da clipp tho-
he like da "fuck animals" y u think deadly vision is on top of a "purple hippo"-
.. not too creative.. ok personal i suppose
dont believe a bar dat come off dis homo's breath,he dont hold no tecs-
he couldn't get signed if "jermaine dupri" was really "so-so-deaf"-[def]
the rhyme is a bit weak.. the line is ok.
u fukkin garbage and im da sickest herb respect it-
deadlyvision:yo marv if i dont have "sex" and "rap" will i get signed da "virgin records"
kinda funny.. not a great punch though


Queens??You Remind Me Of The Sound When Pimps Slap Hoes, Whack/
Cause This Bitch Couldn't Spit Ill If He Was Eminem Black/
meh... seems like a forced rhyme, not feeling this opener
You ryde Dick, You Just Love To Kiss Glass Cause Like Jordan Your Raps Aren't In Tact/
Sickest?? Another Fag Ama verbally rape ya Betta Believe thats a FAct/
blah...
I Hope This Pussy Dont Come ''Weak''(Week) I Didn't Know The ''Date'', Your weak Verse Is Like The French Rovultion And Your IN the Third-Estate/
ok this line is long enough to be a bar, so no multi. the punch is original, but not that hard hitting.
I Spit Like Vajita And Gohan When They Conjuctuate, And You Still a Pussy Like A Sycic Cause Your ''Already Know Your Fate''/
bah... a dbz line.. you're lucky i know who they are..

--Switch--

I'm speakin' the truth, this cross dresser's in need of rebuke,C'mon Most of ya shirts don't have a back...and soon neither will you/
why did you switch here, and not two lines ago? this a nice punch though.
I bet you're a virgin too, for sex ya pray & cry for it often
Today's a lucky day, you'll get laid...inside of a coffin/
nice, nice.
You a Royal?? In regards ta that, you're a buddin' new star
Just like Mekhi Pfifer...cuz you'll be a thug in ER/
nice, nice
I'll beat you within an 'inch' of ya life, where ya couldn't be saved,So many weaknesses in times I'll leave you with a foot in the grave/
not as nice, but keeping the momentum

ok, basically, marv had a more consistent verse, but nothing was standout. deadly everything before the --switch-- was really just substandard, was barely feeling it. however, after that you really turned up the heat and came hard hitting. don't do the first style ever again. tight battle.. very tight.. but i give it to deadly for ending with momentum, whereas marv's verse got weaker towards the end i think.
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