dp did that to me an shadows edge an that shit still counted against us lol

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spul-u didnt really diss Tripple n, it sounded like a track and u were just lashing out on him..now if it was a track shit would have been hott hott...believe that...but i dont think ur punches came hard..ur flow and structure was good tho...

E looch-u always on lock...lol u have this game wrapped..ur punches were there...nice flow and structure...easy read cause i understood...SPUL U SHOULD NEVA EXPLAIN WHAT SOMETHING MEANS IF THEY DONT GET IT THEY SHOULDNT VOTE...

Tripple-Ur good no doubt...ur punches were felt...ur structure and flow was good...sometimes u get off balanced..but thats ight....just stay focused and worry about making ur disses a lil funny...IN A HEATED BATTLE LIKE THIS PPL WANNA HEAR SOME JOKES ALONG THE LINE SO THEY CAN LAUGH

Kingz-u were good...very well spat...good ok punches...nothing special in my eyes...maybe im voting wrong but dont take this the wrong way...IF SPUL DIDNT MAKE HIS SOUND MORE LIKE A TRACK DISS THAN A BATTLE BATTLE THEN YALL WOULD HAVE GOTTEN THE VOTE

vote-Tripple N....spul it was hott for a diss track but this is RB just diss the person by cracking jokes...dont spit like ur in the music industry beefing....get me?

ite nice drops by both sides imma breakdown by partners 2 save all da readin so check it

Spul and kingz-

both of yall threw some ali punches it was crazy u hit them where it hurts and a nice flow 2 go wit it yall added some persoanals here and there 2 make it sicker and both of yalll verses had top notch creativity i can read both of yall verses again nad again its was phat


spul bestline-In yo verse, you’re prolly gonna diss us… for the fact we like the Kings
Nigga, you like the T-Wolves. Thanks to us, you getting no rings

tite

kingz bestline-triple_n?..not u again…I beat ya before….now you ‘bought’ a friend
but ya never gunna beat us….no matter how much you ‘spend’


nice start on him

neither of u 2 had bad linez so nice drop

overall yo verses get a 9.7/10

looch and triple also both of u had consistant verses between da both of u

looch bestline-Say Its A Morning Funeral When These Fags Sent To An Early Grave
Spittin Poorly Unfelt Lyrics bout to get u deported out the home of the brave

hot shit

triple bestline-You say u mixed, well ya moms must be "no flow", an ya pops "garbage"
Then that would explain why all your posted verses are lyrical "carnage"

nice

neitha had bad linez

overall i think yall verses get a 9.5/10

da reason kingz and spul took dis becuz of their punches it harder then looch and triple

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Ight.. heres the break down... im not gonna go into detail cuz everybody above ^^ already did...
kingz and spulteam:
overall yall did good.. spul was the weak nigga and kingz was the strong one.. this battle was a mear 2vs1 1/2... spul.. u needa elevate cuz..
overall:8.5/10

Elooch and Triple N:
Ight u both contributed to a part in thsi team battle.. both of u had good punches in ur raps unlike kingz and spul where only kingz had the tight shit... so u guys won this battle because of that shit..
overall:8.9/10

vote-triple N and E Looch

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SPuL On Triple_N:
*Looks up at the top and see’s Triple_N. Decides to diss him first*

So why’d you challenge me, Triple? I previously merked you once
Pullin’ stupid decisions outta yo hat. It might as well be named “dunce”
^Not A Bad Opener @ All' .. 8/10

Understand I really KO’d you, but you managed to get one vote
Luckily DP was there, but she calls you her “Pimp”, so don’t gloat
^LmfaO' ..!!! Leave Me Out Of This' Shit!!! ... DAMN What The Fuck Was You Thinking.. !!!! 6/10

Goin’ on about your Countless Wins, but damn! You got no game!!!
Zappin’ you by my rhymes Sickness… to you, I’m a Royal Pain
^Nice Closer' ... I Was Feelin It 9/10

Alright Checckit Checck!!

SPuL On E Looch:
*Stops for a moment. See’s E-Looch’s name, and continue’s on*

Jus lookin’ at yo dim-witted name… makes me wanna puke
U get me askin’, “Who the fuck are you, and what the fuck’s an E-Looch?”
^Lmfao!! Haha' .. Nice Opener !!! Heated 10/10

Stop braggin’ about your tiny 6-2 record, and start deliverin’ punches constantly
Man, we’ll win this shit in five… if people decide to vote honestly
^Nice D/R Line' ... 8/10

Knowin’ you can’t win you feed… which you do alotta
Each line of mine will have you “Rowling”, but this shit ain’t Harry Potter
^Nice PunchLine' Got Connected 9/10

Only way you’ll “do” anything… is when you drink Mountain Dew (do the dew)
Ask anyone, they don’t like you. You even rep a stupid crew (no hate)
^Wasnt Really Feeling The Closer 6/10

Sayin’ ya’ll come first… jus like a lightin’ flash
Sorry, you’re more like thunder… cuz you’re gonna finish last
Everyone knos they can’t beat us, cuz we’re highly recommended like safety glasses
Says the first letter in each line… SPuL and Kingz jus merked yo asses
^And Consistant' On The Disses' .. lol!! 10/10

DAMN SPuL' .. Taking His Rage Out On' Yall.. E Looch & Triple_N Haha' ..!!! Anyways Overall Nice Verse' And Consistant Punches' That Got Connected Dropping Decent Bars With Nice WordPlay!!

Switch The Flipt Real Quicck!!

Break Down For Triple_N:
Checckity Checck-

Triple_N On SPuL:

Spuls's rippin':
You say u mixed, well ya moms must be "no flow", an ya pops "garbage"
Then that would explain why all your posted verses are lyrical "carnage"
^Nice Opener' ...!!!! 10/10 __Damn Good Way To Start A Battle Off'!!

Ya rhymes can't touch mines, your lyrics are crimes, read the signs
My shit shines, your structure so fucked up "maco" couldn't straighten ya lines
^Nice WordPlay & Multies There' .. Boi I Was Feelin 'Em!!!! 9/10

I'm predicting ya fate like I was cleo, ya vote count none, this battle's done
Shit, even if you was "neo" you still wouldn't have "one"(won)
^Nice Closer' ...!! For This'... 8/10!!!! It Was Safe!!!!


Triple_N On KingZ:
Kingz Turn!!!!!!LETS DO THIS SHIT RIGHT!!!!!!!

This faggot bitch is number one the "homo ranks"
This guy's asshole gets more refills than "gas tanks"
^Alright Not To Bad Of An Opener' Could Have Been Worded Diff Though 8/10

He goes to malls for heels he has on layaway an makes deposits
I'm a call you "outgrown shirt" cuz you stay "in the closet"
^Alright' .... Nice Punch 7/10

Don't try to reply, cuz ya rhymes are so elementary that their labeled "tonka"
You can't deny the fact that you see more chocolate than "Willy Wonka"
^Nice Closer' Most Deff..!! Haha' ... - - 9/10!

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KingZ On Triple_N:

triple_n?..not u again…I beat ya before….now you ‘bought’ a friend
but ya never gunna beat us….no matter how much you ‘spend’

^Nice Opener!' ... 8/10

You got so many gay punches…you sound like an expert
Either your gay youself….or your a sick fucking pervert
^Nice Punchline' Right There 8/10

Royal Sickness?…yep your crew are pretty sick…hold ya breath
Ya crew got the ‘plague’…ur about to experience ya own ‘black death’
^Shit Is Heated 10/10

My punches will ‘stick with you’…like they ‘super glue’
…but jus remember im more ‘royal’ than ya whole fuckin crew
^Nice Diss On His Crew' .. Name 9/10

KingZ On E Looch:

E Looch?…wot the fuck is that?..you need a name change
If the price is right im sure diasterpeice will do an exchange
^Now' You Also Bringin Me Into This Shit' !!!! Damn You Know You Don't Do That! ** But Alright Punch 7/10

‘E’? yep you rap like you have have OD’d on ‘ecstasy’
On A trip so bad, u see ya momma next~to~me having sex~with~me
^Safe Punch' .. 8/10

You look unhappy dog…you got a case of the blues?
Fuck E Looch…from now on you gonna be known as ‘E Lose’
^Alright Closer' ... 7/10

ya crew r all ‘fat’ computer nerds…jus remember ‘greed’ is one of 7 deadly sins
ya new crew motto: MAKING EVERYONE SICK WIT OUR COUNTLESS CHINS
^Nice ' Diss On There Crew Right There' .. 10/10

Break Down For E Looch:

Checcckity Checck!!!

E Looch On Both Of Em:

Say Its A Morning Funeral When These Fags Sent To An Early Grave
Spittin Poorly Unfelt Lyrics bout to get u deported out the home of the brave

^Nice Opener 9/10 But You On Who?!!!!!!!

Kings you wack scientific raps and ya particles
only hold mags and shoot feds when you mad at Sports Illustrated articles
^Nice Punch Against KingZ' ..!!! Im Feelin It 9/10

an spull lovin Dada so he finally can be in C Webbs shoes
his only way of bein a sac king cause his balls half the size of cashews
^Lmfao!! Haha' ... Nice Shit Playa 10/10~~


Anyways.. Ya'll Had Real Nice Verses But Im Going With!!

Checckit Checck

KingZ & SPuL On This Shit' !!.... They Had Way More Practical Heated Punches That Hit Harder' ...

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lol um that opener was on spul seein that it was spelt out in bold letters lmaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo


uppin for some votes and who reopened this im guessin spul

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Lmfao' Well I Aint Seen It' ..!!! But Its Cool' ... Good Verse' !!!

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i liked the team of triple n and e looch my fav line was that cum stain line from triplen e looch you can hard to laughed my ass of for this whole battle

kingz nice verse came hard like your punches you too had me laughin my ass off spul you had um nice punches but not what im uesed to seein man overall i gave this to triple n and e looch

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aight check it

team 1:
flow:7/10
wordplay:7/10
vocab:8/10
punches:7/10
Creativity:6/10
Opener:6/10
closer:6/10
overall:47/70

Comment:yo were pretty consistant in ur flows and ur punches hit a bit harder than team IIs

Fav/line:kings opener against e looch


Team II
flow:6/10
wordplay:7/10
vocab:7/10
punches:8/10
Creativity:6.10
Opener:6/10
closer:6/10
overall:46/70

Comment:well what can i tell ya ur punches didnt hit as hard as team 1s.

Fav/line:closer for spul

vote/team 1

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spul nice flow ok vocab could use a little work structure pretty good structure could try to even lines out a lil bit u came with nice personals id like 2 c more multis thouhg u had a few played lines but 4 the most part were pretty creative i liked how u used the first letters thats ill so urs is pretty advanced im gonna give u a 8.5/10
tripplen ur structure wasnt quite as good as spuls ur lines were uneven quite a bit so that could use some work u came with mad personals like spul u had ok vocab couyld use some work though u came really played like every line was played so u need to work on creativity ur verse was good but dropped off on the 2 verse ill give u a 5.5/10
kings ok verse u flow stuck in a few places but was pretty good ur structure was pretty good u came a lil played though so u need to work on creativity u came with good personals pretty good verse ive ssen better from u though ill give u a 7/10

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ok
elooch ur strusture could use a lil help a few of ur lines were really uneven ur flow started out really nice and slowly faded off it could use some work ur creativity was ok u didnt have very good personals like the reast ur vocab was the best out of all or them but u just didnt have a very good verse i fetl ill give u a 6.5/10 ive seen better from u
so spuls team 15.5/20
tripples team 12/20 u really didnt work up 2 ur potential id like 2 c a rematch

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