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K.S.Trin 4 44.44%
Terror 5 55.56%
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Old 05-10-04, 11:33 PM   #31
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I will have to say Terror took this shit
he had a better verse in my eyes
although this shit was pretty even
Terror edged it out just a little bit
good job to the both of you
and both of you need to elevate
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123431
hit that shit up

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Old 05-11-04, 04:24 PM   #32
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Old 05-11-04, 04:34 PM   #33
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Checckity Checck Checck....


Breakdown For Terror:

Your Come at me with that B/S ur just a Hot-Shot//
Kid ur Rhymes are Unbalanced like a Teator-Tot//
^May Be True But In This Case!! "I Think Not" .. lmfao.. Anyways A Weak Opener 7/10

Little Marshall Your Dreams have just Been Shattered//
Well like ur Freestyles i left u on the Mic Ripped & Tattered//
This goes to show whos best Rookie Cause u just got Batterd//
^3Lines Didnt' Go Well With The Flow.. & Fucked Up Your Verse' !!... Should Have Left The Last Line Off' .. & It Would Of Been Swell... (Lol) .. Anyways With That Being Said.. 9/10 I Though It Was One Of Your Better Lines Unlike G'Killaz!!!!

Break Down For...' KTrini:

You think you sexy , yet you got a dad that look like Paul Bearer//
You call urself Terror , cause to your parents , you nutin but an error//
^LmfaO WTF Does His Dad Got To Do Wit This? You Replacin 'Em As Mama Jokes Or Something... 6/10.. Aint Feelin The Opener!!

U not a rapper...that pre-written shit shouldn't even be called a verse//
Nigga , you more manly than a nurse........ or wearing a purse //
^Ok.. Weak Punch.. 5/10

And you stroll round here thinking you good and you deserve props!!//
And you be thinking I suck? .. but you forget that's you and ur pops//
^You Obsessed.. With His "Pops" ???!!! (Lol) Because That's What It Looks Like..!!! 4/10

You more liked....... than a cockroach or Micheal Jackson tattoo //
When niggas hear the name TERROR ,they gonna be like WHO!!??!?!//
^Weak Closer' .. Getting Nothing Out Of It!!! .. Elevate.. Kiid!!

Vote: Terror
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Old 05-11-04, 04:54 PM   #34
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Old 05-11-04, 05:24 PM   #35
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terror - aight ur verse was okay...i expected you to be a lot better for sum reason...o well....decent wordplay....good flow....bad meta's....bad punches....u didnt hit directely....a lot of it was jus played and u used the same concept about rookie of the year....i give ur verse a 5 out of 10....

k.trini - aight your verse was okay too....better punches...but very gay punches....wordplay was ok....flow was ok....didnt feel ur punches....but u had 1 or 2 that were nice....i give your verse a 5.3 out of 10...

CLOSE BATTLE BUT...
I GOTTA GIVE THIS...
TO...
K.S.Trin...for the fact that they had better punches...

Both need to elevate...

Vote - K.S.Trin...no hate just a vote...
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Old 05-11-04, 07:12 PM   #36
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Your Come at me with that B/S ur just a Hot-Shot//
Kid ur Rhymes are Unbalanced like a Teator-Tot//
NOT FEELIN IT

Your a Shady Worshiper,Hes your Life Long Rap Idol//
But u aint got his skill so Rookie of the Year isnt ur Title//
I HATE EM LINES!!

You changed ur name hopin u could escape ur Losing Slump//
Im leavin Craters on u,Ur Rhymes dont evan make a Bump//
PRETTY GOOD

Ill Rip-Out-Ur-Heart leavin u Without a Blood Flow//
I just took ur Only Flow,killen u will put me on Death Row//
GOOD PUNCH,THIS IS UR BEST BAR

Little Marshall Your Dreams have just Been Shattered//
Well like ur Freestyles i left u on the Mic Ripped & Tattered//
This goes to show whos best Rookie Cause u just got Batterd//
WEAK CLOSING........



You think you sexy , yet you got a dad that look like Paul Bearer//
You call urself Terror , cause to your parents , you nutin but an error//
UR BEST PUNCH IN THIS BATTLE.....

U not a rapper...that pre-written shit shouldn't even be called a verse//
Nigga , you more manly than a nurse........ or wearing a purse //
WTF? THIS SHIT DOESNT EVEN MAKE SENSE......

Go look in the mirror and ask yourself "WHY DO I RAP ????? " //
Cause you having sex with a girl as hard as u can...feel like a love tap//
? THIS IS GAY

And you be walking around like you just been taking-it-in-the-chin//
Cause your dad fucked you more than Anjellina Jolie in Original Sin//
GAYYYYYYYY!!!!!!

And you stroll round here thinking you good and you deserve props!!//
And you be thinking I suck? .. but you forget that's you and ur pops//
GAYER!!!!!!!!!

You more liked....... than a cockroach or Micheal Jackson tattoo //
When niggas hear the name TERROR ,they gonna be like WHO!!??!?!//
THATS THE WACKEST SHIT I'VE EVER SEEN!!!!!!!

UMMM...NOT SPECTACULAR VERSES BY EITHER.....BUT TERROR HAD ONE GOOD PUNCH ABOUT FLOW,N HIS BEST PUNCH WAS BETTER THEN UR BEST PUNCH......THE REST OF TERRORS WAS WEAK WITH THE EXCEPTION OF THE OTHER DECENT PUNCH.....BUT THE OTHER DUDE,THE REST OF HIS ENTIRE VERSE WAS HORRIFIC.....ESPECIALLY THE SECOND HALF I DUNNO WHAT U'RE THINKIN..........NOOBIES PLEASE.....DO NOT RAP ABOUT HIS DAD SUCKIN HIS DICK N DO NOT MAKE REFERENCES TO MOVIES,RAPPERS,OR ANYTHING LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!WACK!!!
VOTE=TERROR

UMMMMMM....SHOULDNT THERE BE MORE VOTES THAN SHOWIN ON THE POLL?
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Old 05-11-04, 07:53 PM   #37
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Yea one kid couldnt vote yet.

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Old 05-12-04, 08:55 PM   #38
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Old 05-14-04, 10:13 AM   #39
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Old 05-14-04, 10:44 AM   #40
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ls trin go this for sure he had some dope punches and flow
and also had a good opener so in my opinion he takes this.
Terror u was str8 but ur shit seemed a lil bit streched @
some parts which made ur punches fall off.

Vote : KS Trin
 
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Old 05-14-04, 03:18 PM   #42
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Old 05-14-04, 07:32 PM   #43
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Old 05-15-04, 01:12 PM   #44
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Old 05-15-04, 01:25 PM   #45
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Aight im givin this to terror, heres how i break it down...


KTrini - You had a below average spit, you tried to pull out one multi, but i thought it was completely horrible

Nigga , you more manly than a nurse........ or wearing a purse //

Your rhymes were played for example

Go look in the mirror and ask yourself "WHY DO I RAP ????? " //

-So played

You had alright punches but they didnt compete with terror

TERROR- You had pretty good punches, better then KTrini, Your rhymes were creative, and not as played ad KTrini

Im givin it to Terror here... Nuff Said
 
 


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